My Messy Room
My messy room,
What shall I do.
You are so messy,
And you need a cleaning too.
I want to pick you up,
But you are too messy,
even for me.
So I think I will be lazy
And just sit around too.
2006-10-22 03:46:34 · 12 answers · asked by Tina Louise Smith 1 in Politics & Government ➔ Immigration
Oh messy room
how do you feel
are you angry with me
do you love me still
my shirt on the floor
my pants on the chair
those shoes from yesterday
the brush with my hair
oh messy room
the comfort that you give
if only you could see
the way that I live
one day i'll clean you
then you shall see
the one that was messy
was really me.
2006-10-22 05:16:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
This one could actually be tied into illegal immigration.
Messy room being the mess that we have now with millions upon millions of illegals.
"And you need a cleaning too." being that almost everyone realizes it's a problem.
"I want to pick you up,
But you are too messy,
even for me.
So I think I will be lazy
And just sit around too."
Meaning the gov. knows there's a problem, but yet is too lazy or just outright does NOT care to take care of the problem.
"Sitting Around" is definitely what our elected "leaders" Do Best!!
2006-10-22 04:02:54 · answer #2 · answered by Hold em Rox 6 · 3⤊ 2⤋
You must be a young one. Well, I like your poem. Its critical, and simple at the same time.
How do I interpret it? Well, there is only one subject... your room. And only one action... you not cleaning it up.
Congrats on getting this kind of a poem published, is all I have to say.
2006-10-22 03:54:48 · answer #3 · answered by Patty_08 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
a real American! Nor you insult my race with the help of the colour of my skin. I even have sensible words to you which will frighten, nonetheless the persons of this land have not forgotten, The flag of this united states will continually brighten.
2016-10-02 13:40:17 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, but I don't see anything here worth publishing. Even with an eye for free verse, sonnets, haikus... sorry, I just don't think this is worth publishing.
2006-10-22 03:56:23 · answer #5 · answered by Hurricane 2 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Okay, imposter- once more
"you're" is short for "you are"- as in:
You're a stalker.
You're a psycho.
"Your" is possessive. As in:
These are not your poems.
2006-10-22 08:13:17 · answer #6 · answered by Namtrac 5 · 5⤊ 1⤋
Sounds like somebody I know.
2006-10-22 03:52:34 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
Very insightful; and I actually agree with holdemrox's interpretation; hummm, looks like you're going somewhere with this one.
2006-10-22 11:47:39 · answer #8 · answered by Stomp 3 · 3⤊ 4⤋
No, I don't think you can buy your way past the physical part...
2006-10-22 03:47:53 · answer #9 · answered by gokart121 6 · 2⤊ 2⤋
You are probably too fat to clean.
2006-10-23 00:01:56 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋