Beauty of The Sea
Sitting alone on the beach watching
the tide go out, the water is captivating.
Like liquid glass that reaches far
out into the horizon, it takes my worries
away. Seeing the dolphins playing
under the sun, I watch in awe at the
beauty that has become my sanctuary.
Almost surreal, this time...as if I have
been dropped into a picture on the wall.
Waves crashing all around me, soothing all
fear. I hear a seagull in the distance.A
lonely cry, looking for a friend and I
marvel at the miracle of this place.
If there is a God, He is out in the
roaring of this all powerful thing, in
the beauty and absolute magic of the sea,
where my heart is restored.
2006-10-22 03:43:16 · 13 answers · asked by Tina Louise Smith 1 in Politics & Government ➔ Immigration
I think that poetry is written to please the author. What matters is what you think of your poetry.
2006-10-22 12:06:56 · answer #1 · answered by Stomp 3 · 3⤊ 1⤋
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2016-10-15 07:27:26 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Congratulations on having your work published. Not sure why you want our opinion but here goes;
The imagery is really good, but I personally don't like the way the full stops run over the lines. I feel it could use some work.
I'm studying a BA Hons in English btw which includes poetry.
2006-10-22 03:56:19 · answer #3 · answered by F 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. (Carl Sandburg)
Did it make you dance? And I agree with another poster-"Just hope your not plagiarizing.
Maybe try posting in the poetry section next time??".
Your poem is fine.
2006-10-22 06:04:28 · answer #4 · answered by *** The Earth has Hadenough*** 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
You'll have to fill out the applications yourself, and probably have to take a physical test, of some kind...but, good luck! I'm sure you'd make a good Patrol agent!
2006-10-22 03:46:51 · answer #5 · answered by gokart121 6 · 2⤊ 2⤋
Better than the Billy Joel one from yesterday I will give you that.
Just hope your not plagiarizing.
Maybe try posting in the poetry section next time??
2006-10-22 03:47:01 · answer #6 · answered by Hold em Rox 6 · 6⤊ 2⤋
boy..gr8.. try lokin on a handsome boy nxt time
2006-10-22 03:52:27 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
sorry but i think its a bit borin
2006-10-22 03:46:34 · answer #8 · answered by steve 4 · 3⤊ 2⤋
somebody liked it too!
2006-10-22 03:54:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like it. made me think I was at the beack..
2006-10-22 03:44:45 · answer #10 · answered by carasmom 3 · 1⤊ 3⤋