Now I've memorized it!
I just love it so much!
I think its sooo beautifly SAD!
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In my life were I did so well
I met this guy I loved so well
now he took my heart and set it free!
1 day he sat a girl on his knees
and told her things he never told me!
so I broke down and cried on my bed
and not a single word waz said
..................
late that night my father searched 4 me from left 2 right
he broke my bedroom door
& found me hanging by a rope!
he cut me down with his knife
and on the floor a note he found......
Dig my grave dig it deep
marble stone from head 2 feet
put my heart from up above
2 tell the world I died 4 love!
...................
its just a poem
dont think its about me!!
so what u think???
2006-10-21 06:43:32 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
It's a beautiful poem, but any girl that would commit suicide for some idiot guy really has problems! There is not any guy that is worth that. Life goes on and you always meet someone better than the bad boyfriend you had. Life is too beautiful to end it for a guy who is an ***.
2006-10-21 06:56:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
a little polish here and there,and who knows I'd remove the numbers. In all of such similar poetry mostly of the the past,Ive read byron/shelly especially,as well as my own unknown numbers are not used unless to describribe the construct of something,and in these days where words count by editors words more than numerals likely used.
ALL THE VERY BEST
2006-10-21 14:00:24 · answer #2 · answered by steveshoardhouse 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, a very nice poem. I am not talking about the literary standards, but the poem as it comes out of a broken heart?
Well, its very nice well understood. One need not teach English to understand this poem. Nice.
2006-10-21 13:48:41 · answer #3 · answered by JP 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You say it's just a poem, and I hope that's all it is. But it sounds to me more like a cry for help. If something is bothering you, then I suggest you go to a mental health professional for help.
2006-10-21 13:48:52 · answer #4 · answered by Mike M. 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bohoo my boy Friend cheated on me. what's new? I know, I think I'll go and kill myself!
GROW UP! sooooo lame. go kill your self thats the solution, WRONG!
try dating for personality not good looks. you can see where good looks got you. or are you too shalow to go out with someone because there not super good looking. looks don't matter it's what's inside that counts.
2006-10-21 14:20:38 · answer #5 · answered by siahmon 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's a great poem, you made it up?! It's wonderful, you should publish it. And it is so true, a lot of people do that.
2006-10-21 13:47:25 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
to me beautiful sad but true i liked it
2006-10-21 13:55:29 · answer #7 · answered by ...... 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
interesting
2006-10-21 13:55:59 · answer #8 · answered by God Is Love 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
don't like it at all. Log on to "www.poetry.com" and you'll know what i mean.
2006-10-21 13:46:52 · answer #9 · answered by Sabine 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good,,well done
2006-10-21 13:48:05 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋