This is the site where loads of gold was discovered by James Marshall in January 24, 1828 when he came across a valley the Indians called Cullumah .
2006-10-18 12:06:21 · 3 answers · asked by andrew 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
I would say "on" January 24, 1828, instead of "in," and don't forget to put a comma after 1828, which is always stylistically necessary.
2006-10-18 12:14:07 · answer #1 · answered by nido_tr3s 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is the site where loads of gold was discovered, by James Marshall, in January 24, 1828. When James came across a valley the Indians called Cullumah .
2006-10-18 19:13:22 · answer #2 · answered by Mikey Boy 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Personally, I'd re-write the whole sentence but that's just me.
On January 24, 1828, James Marshall discovered gold in a valley the Indians called Cullumah.
2006-10-18 19:10:09 · answer #3 · answered by kc_warpaint 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋