This bloody and long war was directly caused by one woman; Helen the most beautiful woman in the world.
2006-10-18 12:02:51 · 6 answers · asked by teddybears 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
The long and bloody war was directly caused by one woman; Helen, the most beautiful woman in the world.
If it was me writing it. I would say...
The long and bloody war was directly caused by one woman known as Helen of Troy, the most beautiful woman in the world.
2006-10-18 12:05:22 · answer #1 · answered by Danlow 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No the sentence should read: This bloody and long war was directly caused by one woman: Helen the most beautiful woman in the world. I think. Correct me if i'm wrong.
2006-10-18 12:11:50 · answer #2 · answered by loveizscary 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Check your punctuation: "This bloody and long war was directly caused by one woman - Helen, the most beautiful woman in the world."
2006-10-18 12:06:48 · answer #3 · answered by brenbon1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dont think so, try............. by one women, Helen, the most beautiful women in the world.
2006-10-18 12:06:50 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Helen, you need a COMMA
2006-10-18 12:10:17 · answer #5 · answered by Freakgirl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
grammar is ok, "directly" is too "direct" :) avoid it
2006-10-18 12:11:31 · answer #6 · answered by kourtina1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋