When I go 2 sleep I start to dream of thoughts,pictures,and feelings beyond my wildest dream.
Better than anything I've imagined or hoped for.
Something I wished will happen
something I hoped will happen.
I've never felt this way
until you came around
and sat next to me that day
you made me laugh
that broke my heart in half
I've never felt this feeling before,so strong
so happy
so lucky
so furtunte
BUT...you dont really love me
or even like me
so I'll just go back to sleep
and start to dream of
thoughts pictures,and feelings I have for you!
2006-10-18 06:39:13 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
wow,your good.i write poetry too,but nothing as good as that.
2006-10-18 06:41:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent
2006-10-18 13:45:25 · answer #2 · answered by Plague92 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Girl friend if you want to be a poet "GO FOR IT" Some advice...There is only one person worth dreaming about ... Jesus! He will care! I know what it is like to have a broken heart and I always try to remember the Lord is my Love and Life.
2006-10-18 13:58:30 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I would say there is a person that you fantasize about but he may not even exist or if he does he is untouchable and you feel satisfied with life when your with that person in your dreams
2006-10-18 13:42:32 · answer #4 · answered by dmxdragon2 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW - very deep - I liked it - I would love to know the story behind this poem.
2006-10-18 13:41:47 · answer #5 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If your avatar is you, you're beautiful.
As for the poem, I'd stop waiting and try to get with it, if you have such feelings for him.
2006-10-18 13:54:09 · answer #6 · answered by MisterO 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is a really good poem, check some of your spelling though but other than that it is a great poem. good job!! :)
2006-10-18 13:41:26 · answer #7 · answered by Supposedly Pregnant But Not 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If your under grade ten it might do for a class presentation
2006-10-18 13:41:36 · answer #8 · answered by pisces girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good to start with , Go on and write more you ll really shine.
2006-10-18 13:42:34 · answer #9 · answered by nathan_pal 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hate sad poems...well writen I suppose though
2006-10-18 13:42:40 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋