Our love is like a lump of gold
hard 2 get and hard 2 hold
I do believe that God above
created u 4 me 2 love
he picked u out from all the rest
coze he knew I loved u best
if Im in heaven and ur not there
I'll wait 4 u on the golden stair
if ur not there on judgment day
I know u've gone the other way
so I'll return my harms and other things
2 go 2 hell 2 be with u............
............
what u think!
2006-10-18 02:34:12 · 33 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I love it... sounds a lot like my life ,when judgment day come before me . I will be looking for two lady's. one my grandmother she was like my mom since my mom died in 84 i was 8( in two weeks i would turn 9). She made a promise to my mom that she would be there for us .And believe me she done more for my brother and i than any body would have done.Second my mom... that i don't have memory's of her, just to see her would be a wish come true. that if my grandmother was such a great women, then so should my mom? think you for the poem that takes me away for a minute. (mom died at 29 of heart failure)
2006-10-18 03:04:02 · answer #1 · answered by Hayes Concrete 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I actually really enjoyed your poem. However, use of the proper english language would have been a real asset. Do not like all these short forms for words as they take away from a person's ability to read and write. Other than that though really did think it was quite nice.
2006-10-18 02:43:29 · answer #2 · answered by crazylegs 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its really good until you get to the Hell part. You wont want to go to Hell to be with someone you love b/c when we are all before God on Judgement Day then we wont know ppl the way we do now in Heaven. Otherwise its very romantic!!!
2006-10-18 02:41:52 · answer #3 · answered by Ariel 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You certainly have the gift for writing poems...and I am sure someon e will appreciate this particular one. However, I am an atheist and don't really like poems with words like God and heaven..as I don't believe in it. I do like love poems though and i do write poems myself. IN any case I would not post your original poems online for the whole world to see cause there is no copyright and people could take it and make it theirs...so stop posting it here ...not very smart thing to do.
2006-10-18 02:39:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds like typical teenage puppy love poetry, chances are in 2 months he will be sending similar drival to your friends.
2006-10-18 02:37:00 · answer #5 · answered by Wandering Critic 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem , A little bit naive, you know...
If you really love your friend , don't wait to the judgment day, make your best that he will be in heaven , that's love
2006-10-18 02:40:10 · answer #6 · answered by really? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty good. see ya in hell lmao.
2006-10-18 02:36:37 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ohh my god, that is a GREAT poem and it sounds like maybe u really do like someone and they inspired this poem? it's VERY good, I really like it. Write some more and email them to me at chemicals_react2@yahoo.com lol.
2006-10-18 02:36:03 · answer #8 · answered by ♥#1 Miley Cyrus Fan♥ 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
deep again like would u do dat 4 a man/boy like 4 real dat is like some crazy S*** foreal i like it alot i have lots of poetry i could share they are toooooooo deep
2006-10-18 02:37:06 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It was nice at the beginning but with a twisted ending.
2006-10-18 02:36:10 · answer #10 · answered by shae 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋