Now I've memorized it!
I just love it so much!
I think its sooo beautifly SAD!
.................................
In my life were I did so well
I met this guy I loved so well
now he took my heart and set it free!
1 day he sat a girl on his knees
and told her things he never told me!
so I broke down and cried on my bed
and not a single word waz said
..................
late that night my father searched 4 me from left 2 right
he broke my bedroom door
& found me hanging by a rope!
he cut me down with his knife
and on the floor a note he found......
Dig my grave dig it deep
marble stone from head 2 feet
put my heart from up above
2 tell the world I died 4 love!
...................
its just a poem
dont think its about me!!
so what u think???
2006-10-18 02:13:50 · 20 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
This poem it made me a little sad
A suicide in the bedroom that is bad
Why not something with a bit more joy
Like a child playing with a Christmas toy
Or puppies and Kittens on the lawn
Or waking up to a glorious dawn
I hope this poem is not about you
Please, please, please say that is true
2006-10-18 02:22:03 · answer #1 · answered by marcus p 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow. That was a sad and touching poem. Very good and really emotionally deep. Very good.
2006-10-18 09:26:12 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
oh it is sooooo sad but that is the lenght that someone will go to after being heart-broken. it is a gorgous poem and is like you said "beautifly SAD".
2006-10-18 09:19:20 · answer #3 · answered by dicko_2727 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It could be very good ,but in some places you try to ryme you need to reword some of it work it around a poem dont have to ryme ,I like it but it needs some work .
2006-10-18 09:17:47 · answer #4 · answered by Holly 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sweetie I write poetry and although this is O K I can do better.
What book are you getting these out of ?
2006-10-18 13:38:46 · answer #5 · answered by irishlad 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really like that alot seee i write poem my self i started at the age 12 and now im 17yr and it was strong just like your was
love marla
2006-10-18 09:35:23 · answer #6 · answered by ManImSadINeedAHug 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its not worth killing your self over another person , and if it did happen,the person would have sinned so they would have went to hell. Why write about death? Write about happiness and life and being free.
2006-10-18 09:23:00 · answer #7 · answered by littleshygui 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that was touching.... I feel like a jerk!!!! Dang. I'm gonna call all of my ex-girlfriends tonight to make sure that all of them are still alive...LOL
Honestly, though, GREAT POEM!!!
2006-10-18 09:17:37 · answer #8 · answered by Michael T 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is beautifully sad like u said. i love it. it plucks a heart string
2006-10-18 09:17:18 · answer #9 · answered by Belosnezhka (aka Gex) 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yo dat uis really deep and i love dat poem dat jawn is nice
2006-10-18 09:21:46 · answer #10 · answered by GeorgeGirl1992 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋