Vivo en una estrella
Radiante de luz
No llores mi qusencia
estoy con Jesus
Yo desde mi estrella
te puedo mirar
Dame tu sonrisa
Para descansar.
if you see any mistakes.I would appreciate it if you let me know.I'm not so good with spanish.TIA.
2006-10-16 11:18:58 · 3 answers · asked by authentic_nikchik 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
I live in a star
Beaming ( or radiant ) with light
Do not weep for my absence
I am with Jesus
I from my star
Can look down on you
Give your smile
To rest
Nice writing
2006-10-16 14:46:02 · answer #1 · answered by Carlos 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I live in a star
Full of light
Dont cry if im gone (is ausencia not qusencia)
I´m with Jesus
From my star
I can look upon you
Give me your smile
So I can be calm
But actually is really good... just for that only word that u spell wrong but in general is really good
2006-10-16 19:18:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Alive in a Radiating star of light you do not cry my qusencia I am with Jesus I from my star you I can watch Dame your smile to rest
Nope, not that I see of
2006-10-16 19:28:56 · answer #3 · answered by chaos causer 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋