My cold heart
Broken and torn apart
Its not like anyone cares
No one thinks the way I do
You Never knew how I felt for you
But you threw me away
And Its not like you ever cared
What is love anyway
Its just another way to get hurt
My heart
Burning and ripped apart
Torn In two...
And I still fall for you
2006-10-14 09:18:56 · 6 answers · asked by What you did....Why?....Why?.... 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
That's very good. I love to read poetry. You definitely have a knack....Keep writing, and save them all in a journal....
who knows, maybe you'll become a writer...if you aren't one already. I used to write poetry, a long time ago. Even had one of mine published in a poetry collection book. I really do miss writing, somehow have lost interest. Writing is very healthy for anyone. It's a great way to put your feelings in to words....As you've shown here...
Keep up the good work ! ! ! !
2006-10-14 09:24:26 · answer #1 · answered by Sweetea 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it ... try to add some more to it though , make it a lil longer
2006-10-14 16:20:26 · answer #2 · answered by ♥ Army Wife ♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u are a good poet you should get published
2006-10-14 16:25:07 · answer #3 · answered by bonnie j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It made me want to kill myself. Good Job!
2006-10-14 16:20:41 · answer #4 · answered by denverbroncos1973 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it, your really turning me crazy.
2006-10-14 16:36:00 · answer #5 · answered by Tosin A 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it !!!
2006-10-14 16:23:57 · answer #6 · answered by Kathy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋