to her the 2sec girl to brake my heart
she dose not know
she dose not care
but she the one that hurt me this way
oh renee
the pain of it all that i feel in my heart
that hardens my soul and cause me to be cold
the ever lasting memory of u corusing throw my soul
but alas i have found a place in my own heart
were i feed on my on hellish thoughts
of only being like you
and braking hearts
the is my new gift my lust
i shell never love again
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Y abre los ojos
2006-10-13 20:52:03 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
very original.
It more closely resembles prose not poetry but it shows promise.
Amor, que es? Es una cosa muy magnifico!
2006-10-13 21:54:42 · answer #1 · answered by mindbender - seeker of truth 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is it a poem? Any way good work, wel done
2006-10-14 04:04:12 · answer #2 · answered by niceguy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is it a poem? Any way good work, wel done.
2006-10-14 03:55:23 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
COOL poem
2006-10-14 04:03:24 · answer #4 · answered by Bored_girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NICE
2006-10-14 03:54:56 · answer #5 · answered by SG 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋