I trust the red sun setting.
The leafless November trees.
On Monday morning I look forward
Fearlessly to Fridays eve.
But humans are not as reliable
As nature, as trees.
I wonder if you'll come back.
I trust only that you'll leave.
2006-10-11 12:07:59 · 11 answers · asked by deno 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Not bad....not bad at all........sounds about how I feel right now.....
2006-10-11 12:10:08 · answer #1 · answered by honey_bear_21_1999 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good meter, nice emotive visuals.
Somewhat on the bleak side though, but, hey, it's Wednesday, so bleak is the order of the day!
2006-10-11 12:14:39 · answer #2 · answered by George Curious 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's it about? Not trusting your lover, but trusting nature? It would be okay if I knew what it was about.
2006-10-11 12:11:30 · answer #3 · answered by Forgotten Poet 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not the best I've heard their isn't no rhyming going on but if its your first then you can alone get better.
2006-10-11 12:11:16 · answer #4 · answered by shellz1616 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's really nice
2006-10-11 12:10:02 · answer #5 · answered by bernie2u4 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Corny, but keep trucking!
2006-10-11 12:10:14 · answer #6 · answered by SKATER2 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
2006-10-11 12:11:05 · answer #7 · answered by chestlee 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2006-10-11 12:09:59 · answer #8 · answered by BROWNLYN 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
five girls to one guy, i think you did something right. good for you.
2006-10-11 12:12:24 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
NICE.
2006-10-11 12:09:55 · answer #10 · answered by 2"CUTE"2B30 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋