Trista is a normal teenage girl, crushes, middle school, friends, and one anoying brother. While at mcdonalds stoping for breakfast she finds her self talking to her biggest crush ever and an accendental slip out of her liking him turns great, he asked her out! Evrything went down hill in the next school year her jelouse best friend of 13 years stabs her in the back and leaves her with a broken heart.Trista thought she lost evrything. When a concerned teacher finds bruses on her she takes a stand little did she know Trista did that her self. CPS (Child protective services) takes Trista nad her brother away! They were put in a foster home. Trista thought there was no way out until she thought about it. Suicide! Will she do it? Will things get better for the young girl? Or will they just get worse?
2006-10-11 11:45:32 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Iam a teen thank you very much!
2006-10-11 11:49:05 · update #1
NO NO NO this is not of my life NONONONNO
2006-10-11 11:52:03 · update #2
This is not a cry for help GOD its just a book me and my friends are wright!!! God you people are depressing me!!!
2006-10-11 11:55:58 · update #3
If you are talking about real life things can get better. This sounds pretty complicated so you'll have to figure out who is the best adult available to turn to. If you are ready to "off" yourself I would say that you have reached rock-bottom. Things can only get better from there.
2006-10-11 11:53:50 · answer #1 · answered by connie_mspt 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes i did read it and am sorry i did. Obviously it is a poor attempt at writing disguised as a real plea for help. You should seek some therapy or start abusing drugs. Suicide isn't as easy as you think. Maybe if you slowed down, developed your characters, added some dialogue, and fixed your grammatical errors it would be something good. But that takes work!
2006-10-11 11:52:25 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wouldn't personally read it, but I might suggest it to someone in their teen years. It sounds like you are on the road to being a writer... Keep up the good work, keep setting goals and keep achieving them!
2006-10-11 11:55:33 · answer #3 · answered by Smitty 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you give the characters good depth and good dialogue then it may be a good read.
If this is the story of your life the seek professional help and don't lose hope.
2006-10-11 11:50:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would definitly read it. It sounds like a self help guide to how being a teenager really is. Maybe not exactly like mine was, but depression and anxiety are big factors, believe me! Hope its a good one. :)
2006-10-11 11:51:09 · answer #5 · answered by ◙Blue-Eyed♥Red-Headed♥Bella◙ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Personally, no. But i'm 20. If it were marketed towards teens and tweens it may work out fairly well for you.
Good luck!
2006-10-11 11:47:48 · answer #6 · answered by uncletoon2005 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't comet suicide and if you are posting it up here isn't the best idea.
2006-10-11 11:50:33 · answer #7 · answered by kat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋