LOOKING FOR ENGLISH MOTHER TONGUE! Can anyone tell me if I wrote this passage in correct English? Thank you!!?

Question

During my university career I met a lot of subject very different, but as a whole they could get me to know a lot of things in many ambits like history, economy, law and human rights.
During the first period of two years in common for every course, I frequented with success the courses concerning the Italian juridical system (private law, public law, constitutional law) and I started the study of economics and historical subjects.
Since the first year I furthermore continued to study English and French, already started at the junior high school. Besides, I frequented some seminars organized by some professors of mine, in the sphere of problems bound to Italian form of government.
In the second period of two years I decided to attend a route bound to international politics and human rights, examining deeply the study of international relations both from the historical point of view (“history of international organization”) and subjects like international law and international relations.
Considering that from the beginning of my school career I had special interest in the United Nations and its activities, I decided to examine thoroughly this theme with the course of “international organisation” that was centred on the study of the U.N.
Contemporaneously at this course I had the possibility to frequent a seminar concerning the process of the U.N. international sanctions, and to go deep in this part of activity of this organization.
Human rights theme was faced in several courses like “human rights”, “bioethics”, “international protection of human rights”.
With the study of “political and economical geography” and “history and institutions of Afro-Asiatic countries” I could face themes tied to underdevelopment, made deeper with a cycle of meetings extra-university centred in Africa and its problems.
Becoming fond of this topic I decided to develop my graduation thesis right on the decolonisation problems and on difficulties faced by African countries at the moment of the arrival to the independence.
Particularly, I deal with the Belgian Congo event and the problems that this country lived in the last years of European colonialism.

Answer 1

It is readable, but not proper English, and a few words are incorrect. Hopefully, my revisions will make better sense.

Notes - Since I don't know what you meant by "route bound", I wrote **seminar** instead, as it seems to make better sense, however, I would suggest you remove the asterisks I placed, find whatever word you intended, and replace it.

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During my time in university, I encountered a variety of subjects, but as a whole, they would help me to learn many things such as history, economy, law and human rights. During the first period of two years, I frequently saw success in courses concerning the Italian judicial system (private law, public law, constitutional law) and I started the study of economics and historical subjects. After the first year, I continued to study English and French, having begun at the junior high school level. In addition to this, I frequented some seminars organized by some of my professors, in the sphere of problems bound to the Italian form of government. In the second period of two years I decided to attend a **seminar** in international politics and human rights, deeply examining the study of international relations both from the historical point of view (“history of international organization”) and subjects like international law and international relations.

Considering that from the beginning of my school career I had special interest in the United Nations and its activities, I decided to examine thoroughly this theme with the course of “international organisation” that was centred on the study of the U.N. During this time, I had the opportunity to frequent a seminar concerning the process of the U.N. international sanctions, and to be heavily involved in this organization. Human rights themes were faced in several courses like “human rights”, “bioethics”, “international protection of human rights”. With the study of “political and economical geography” and “history and institutions of Afro-Asiatic countries” I could face themes tied to underdevelopment, made deeper with a series of meetings outside of the university, centred in Africa and its problems.

Becoming fond of this topic, I decided to develop my graduation thesis right on the decolonisation problems and on difficulties faced by African countries at the moment of the arrival to their independence. Particularly, I dealt with the Belgian Congo event and the problems that this country has lived in the last years of European colonialism.
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I hope you find my revisions satisfactory and helpful. It is still worded a little oddly, but it's the best I could do to improve the flow of words.

Answer 2

I'll help with the first sentence - someone else can maybe do the rest! Nice try though.
During my University course I encountered a lot of very different subjects. On the whole they taught me a lot of things, such as: history, economy, law and human rights.

Answer 3

LOOKING FOR ENGLISH MOTHER TONGUE! Can anyone tell me if I wrote this passage in correct English? Thank you!!?


During my university career I met a lot of subject very different, but as a whole they could get me to know a lot of things in many ambits like history, economy, law and human rights.
>During my university career I became aquainted with a wide range of subjects, and focused particularly in the areas of history, economy, law, and human rights.

During the first period of two years in common for every course, I frequented with success the courses concerning the Italian juridical system (private law, public law, constitutional law) and I started the study of economics and historical subjects.
>I was very successful in ealy coursework concerning the Italian judicial system (private law, public law, constitutional law). I also began the study of economics and history.

Since the first year I furthermore continued to study English and French, already started at the junior high school. Besides, I frequented some seminars organized by some professors of mine, in the sphere of problems bound to Italian form of government.
>I also continued to study English and French languages (already started in Junior High School). I also attended seminars on Problems related to the Italian form of government.

In the second period of two years I decided to attend a route bound to international politics and human rights, examining deeply the study of international relations both from the historical point of view (“history of international organization”) and subjects like international law and international relations.
>In my 3rd and 4th years of study I focused on politics and human rights, examining in depth the study of international relations both from a historical and current international law point of view.

Considering that from the beginning of my school career I had special interest in the United Nations and its activities, I decided to examine thoroughly this theme with the course of “international organization” that was centered on the study of the U.N.
>Because I have always had a strong interest in UN and its activities, I am taking the “International Organization” course which focuses on the UN.

Contemporaneously at this course I had the possibility to frequent a seminar concerning the process of the U.N. international sanctions, and to go deep in this part of activity of this organization.
>Along with the “International Organization” course I also attended a seminar on The Process of UN International Sanctions

Human rights theme was faced in several courses like “human rights”, “bioethics”, and “international protection of human rights”.
>Human Rights was studied in the following courses: Human Rights, Bioethics, International Protection of Humna Rights

With the study of “political and economical geography” and “history and institutions of Afro-Asiatic countries” I could face themes tied to underdevelopment, made deeper with a cycle of meetings extra-university centered in Africa and its problems.
Becoming fond of this topic I decided to develop my graduation thesis right on the decolonisation problems and on difficulties faced by African countries at the moment of the arrival to the independence.
Particularly, I deal with the Belgian Congo event and the problems that this country lived in the last years of European colonialism.
>>With the study of “political and economical geography” and “history and institutions of Afro-Asiatic countries” I could develop themes tied to underdevelopment, and go deeper with a cycle of meetings (outside of the university) centered on Africa and its problems. I will develop my graduation thesis on the decolonisation problems and difficulties faced by African countries at the moment of (new) independence. In particular, I will deal with the Belgian Congo event and the problems that this country had in the last years of European colonialism.

Answer 4

Are you residing in India? according to probability you do not comprehend this, yet not all Indians communicate Hindi. that's not the interior sight language for many southern Indians. in case you in basic terms communicate Hindi, you may't even communicate with people out of your individual usa. in case you learn English you may communicate with fellow Indians and people international. English is the corporation language of the international.

Answer 5

If you really want to revise this properly, you'll have to sit down with someone who speaks english and explain to them what you want to say. The person who went through it entirely did you a great service though, give them the best answer!

Answer 6

I tried to correct this but it made no sense. I'm guessing you're dutch by the way its turned around. Start completely over and take your time.

Answer 7

If you want someone to skip over text,you are wonderfull!! If you wish to communicate with rational beings, minimize all your details and hit on the critical points you wish to convey.

Answer 8

you must of took a lot of time to do that

Answer 9

yeah right