I like this girl at my school and we are best friends, she tells me she likes poetry. I like to write poetry know and i was thinking of showing some to her. She has a boyfriend tho and I had wrote a poem bout her but the one I will show u is not that one. i wanna know if anyone thinks that she would like it. P.S. sorry if u can't understand some of it. I want to show her I'm good so I want to know if ppl think I am good?
Money can get you many things
A house to live in
A car to drive in
Food to eat
And seats to seat
But there is one thing money can’t
buy and that’s love
Love is a big thing to some
and a small for others
But love is delicate from
the young to the elders
No matter where you may be
trust me love is everywhere
From the mountains to the sea
Or the hills and maybe me
Love is in the air so be true, so be fair
Because like I told you
Love is in the air, everywhere
2006-10-09 09:35:30 · 20 answers · asked by Light in the Dark 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
O yea the title for the poem is " Love is Everywhere"
2006-10-09 09:36:05 · update #1
You know what, anything that is considered a poem is a work of art no matter what anyone says. I like your peom, it has a lot of truth in it. It's brave of you to share it by the way, I never share mine.
2006-10-09 09:38:55 · answer #1 · answered by ~jenn~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not too bad. Good job!
Love and inspiration, both of them are everywhere, it's very true.
If you need some more inspiration, you can check out some I've put on my 360 page.
Keep up the good work.
2006-10-09 09:42:20 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you have potential but I wouldn't use this poem. Keep trying and you will get better. It's not really bad but it's not good either. You have guts putting it up for all to see, at least more than I do. You will get better.
2006-10-09 09:42:05 · answer #3 · answered by sackingsfan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well I've already read this poem in a different question u asked but yeah it's very very good
2006-10-09 09:39:13 · answer #4 · answered by crybaby 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Money buys you power,yes,you know its true. Money can get me many things,but what I want is you.
Love don't mean you spread your legs,for every tom and dick,
I'm standing here with heart in hand make up your mind real quick.
what do you think?
2006-10-09 09:41:08 · answer #5 · answered by onelonevoice 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think this poem sucks a s s bigtime
i'd rather give birth to a flaming porcupine than ever read it again
i suspect that you are a homosexual who really wants a guy to give it to you in the a s s
2006-10-09 10:22:53 · answer #6 · answered by NONAME 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if its for a guy then no solid back to the drafting board, if its for a woman it may paintings i'm sticking with this1 for in college roses are pink violets are blue i'm caught in this question am i able to replica off you
2016-10-16 00:30:18 · answer #7 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dont let anyone reck your dreams on here cause theyre good at that- not the place to go because some people are just out for kicks and points--- you have potential keep at it and who knows?? good luck
2006-10-09 09:40:21 · answer #8 · answered by Deidre~&~Joshua 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was ok i wasn't really that much impressed. if your young depending on yuor age then it was good. keep it up though. i write poetry to. just keep at it and as you keep doing it you will get much better trust me.
2006-10-09 10:12:22 · answer #9 · answered by mdbdyot 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was ok except for the few grammer errors.
2006-10-09 09:41:19 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋