I wrote these poems one day. The first one is called " Love is".
Love is a brand new feeling
Love is a brand new thing
Love has its ups and downs
Love can cheer you from your frowns
Its o so delicate, o so good
Love makes you wish you had
those people who would
have your back just like you would
Love is a delicate thing and you just should
always stay true and always stay good
For love is important to those who look for the one who could
No matter if you are a Man or Mam that’s how it should
Love is delicate and o so good
Please tell me if it is good. Leave any comments please.
This one is called "Love is Everywhere"
Money can get you many things
A house to live in
A car to drive in
Food to eat
And seats to seat
But there is one thing money can’t
buy and that’s love
Love is a big thing to some
and a small for others
But love is delicate from
the young to the elders
No matter where you may be
trust me love is everywhere
From the mountains to the sea
2006-10-09 08:56:42 · 9 answers · asked by Light in the Dark 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Here is another one.
They can hurt you
They can help you
Through your hard times
And when you’re blue
But they can burn you
and maybe concern you
So in your relationships please
be true
People have feelings just like
you
And when you’re down just think
of those who are there for you
Cause relationships can be really bad
to you
So be careful I say be careful for you
Some people, some friends
will really help you
Through those hard times
and when you’re blue
Tell me if this one is good.
2006-10-09 08:57:15 · update #1
I give it a 10 (on a scale 4rom 1-10)
U should really get into song writing and singing!
Ya, u`r probably sitting @ u`r computer, saying that u have a terrbile voice (almost every1 says that when ppl ask them 2 sing) But hey, u`ll never know until u try!
2006-10-09 09:01:46 · answer #1 · answered by . 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I don't know anything about poems...keep that in mind. How old are you? If you are 12 they are pretty good. Just being a guy and writing poems impresses me. Are you trying to impress a girl? A guy? Keep them in a journal. Someone will appreciate them. There is a place on line...they say they will pay you for your poems...but it is a scam. Talk to a english teacher, show them your work. Who knows, with a little practice you might be pretty good. If it's something you have a passion for keep it up, something will come out of it.
2006-10-09 09:04:41 · answer #2 · answered by Becky F 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
hiya future poet!!!
I might only be 13 but i totally love love poems!!!!!! And i love ur's 2...All 3 r absolutly gorgeous. U rox!!!!!!! Good Luck
2006-10-09 08:59:19 · answer #3 · answered by v.ballerr <3 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
You wrote this for a girl didn't ya?lol Make sure you give her flowers too!
2006-10-09 09:16:58 · answer #4 · answered by Maureen B 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Those where really good. I liked them.
2006-10-09 09:00:00 · answer #5 · answered by angel2005_2001 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
nice
2006-10-09 09:02:03 · answer #6 · answered by Tanner and Leahs MaMa 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
beautiful
2006-10-09 09:01:07 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
awwww that's sweet! yep, they're good
2006-10-09 09:00:16 · answer #8 · answered by ~fUnKyCoLdMeDiNa~ 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Thanks for sharing it with us.
2006-10-09 08:58:46 · answer #9 · answered by wittlewabbit 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋