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As you gaze into the eyes of a stranger,
But really hes not a stranger at all.
Your soul is tearing through,
as hate is bouncing off each wall.
A slow suddle monster,
with looks that would scare a dragon.
A man that is worse than a lowly dog,
without a tail for wagging.
Lonelyness,pain,hurt,a soul thats suffering,
but no one seems to care.
Until it is finally too late,
then this man isn't there.
As tears are streaming down my face,
I wish someone could help this hurt.
I even get rejected,in the house of God,
at church.
What feelings do you get from this poem.Has anyone ever felt like this.Can you feel the words.
So one last word,I'll say to you,
as I slowly lose my soul.
I wish I was the man of love,
the one you used to know.

2006-10-08 18:34:38 · 4 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

Yes God will never reject someone.But alot of times if you are diffrent than the people at your church you will never be fully accepted.

2006-10-08 18:43:02 · update #1

4 answers

That really touched my heart. It is so true.

2006-10-08 18:52:22 · answer #1 · answered by ladyjamie 6 · 0 0

I LIKE IT, BUT THE ONLY PART THAT I DID NOT LIKE WAS WHEN IT SAID, I EVEN GET REJECTED, IN THE HOUSE OF GOD AT CHURCH, B/C GOD WILL NEVER REJECT ANYONE.

2006-10-08 18:39:18 · answer #2 · answered by tinkerbell 6 · 0 0

NICE!!! romantic is all i can say

2006-10-08 18:40:39 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Wow ...I fink its kool...nice ...but from who to who..???:)

2006-10-08 18:37:22 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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