A love thats lost,A romantic quest,
A woman of beauty,her looks never rest,
A dream you lost,deep within your tears,
This moment in time,will not be forgotten in years,
The softest words,each hour,each day,
Sometimes you just never know, the right words to say,
But one thing for sure,Her memories are my best,
A moment in time,That my mind won't let rest.
Ladies what do you think.Of a moment in time
2006-10-08 18:07:00 · 10 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
yeah i really like it. it is very sweet. and i dont usually like those kinds of things. A+
2006-10-08 18:12:25 · answer #1 · answered by metalchik 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
im gon' sound like a bi**h attemptin to b critic... but i dont really know the actual theme of your poem... i mean i know it's a love poem but... what about it? im prolly just dumb and didn't get it! n the flow is mostly nice... there's parts here n there that's out but yes... nice
other then that... good job!
2006-10-09 01:10:37 · answer #2 · answered by ju5sm3h 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love this poem.Too bad I could never be that creative,lol.
2006-10-09 01:15:15 · answer #3 · answered by Abby 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a sweet poem
2006-10-09 01:12:26 · answer #4 · answered by rxtech05 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww that's really sweet! I love it :)
2006-10-09 01:09:11 · answer #5 · answered by Abigail S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful.
2006-10-09 01:09:28 · answer #6 · answered by foreveris_2long 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is really nice.
2006-10-09 01:12:02 · answer #7 · answered by ladyjamie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What a sweet poem! Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us!
2006-10-09 01:11:13 · answer #8 · answered by PinkHighHeels 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwww. that's sweet
2006-10-09 01:09:00 · answer #9 · answered by mj jy 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is beautiful
2006-10-09 01:11:38 · answer #10 · answered by kylie d 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋