OUTSIDE
The big, blue sky,
Smooth moving green grass.
Hot and Cold,
Harsh and Clear.
When there is a harsh storm,
Stay in your dorm.
When it’s clear,
Have no fear!
House to house,
In the city.
In the country,
No neighbors are near.
Hot will burn,
Cold will freeze.
Hot Coco or ice cream,
If you please.
Even though every season you will get the occasional sneeze!!
2006-10-08 03:37:15 · 11 answers · asked by Saxqueen33 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Preschool
yes very good poem for kids.
2006-10-08 03:39:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes this is a great poem for kids, it's so cute and educational.. it would help them to start understanding how to describe things.. such as "Big Blue Sky".
2006-10-08 22:30:20 · answer #2 · answered by Bubbly me 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No.
Little kids would want it to rhyme -- and the rhyme scheme is awful.
Little kids would want a consistent meter -- and the meter is nonexistent.
Little kids won't know what a dorm is.
2006-10-08 10:43:28 · answer #3 · answered by Ranto 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yeah it's a pretty good poem for kids.
2006-10-11 22:27:10 · answer #4 · answered by Detroit 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good but the little kids may not know what that stuff is
2006-10-08 13:55:37 · answer #5 · answered by sports_gurl_56 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it! its very cute. its the verse of hot coco or ice cream that caught me
2006-10-08 10:46:46 · answer #6 · answered by ~raspberrytruffles~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your Kid like it? Then it is good.I think that it is a little bit long for a little child.
2006-10-08 11:02:48 · answer #7 · answered by 2K10 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is cute. it teaches them about seasons. cept they might not know what a dorm is.
2006-10-08 10:40:21 · answer #8 · answered by Krissi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
theymight not know what alot of those things are, but its really cute.
2006-10-08 10:43:42 · answer #9 · answered by mily 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is cute... they may like it...
2006-10-08 10:47:58 · answer #10 · answered by liz26767 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋