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// I need to send this mail in correct form.Please correct it for me. It is easy .Copy >correct >and peste.
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I know, I am not good in photography.
Last day visit for zina aunt. I got a shock. I can explain it in woed. She turn into a mummy. I shoot some pictures for (for your better understanding) you. hope, you will get it tomorrow. She burn herself. Even she cant walk properly. It should be clear who is responsible for it. and the so called doctor must get punish.

Rayan is out of order. He spoil himself. Every day he fight with his mother. It’s a terrible situation. Today I again meet with zita aunt and bring Rayan with me.

Another shocking news is Banod uncle was hijacked and deadly injured. His eye condition is very bad. I suggest him for rest but he do not pay any penny attention to me.
What can I do? I cant force him.
Zita aunt will stay in Dhaka for her regular checkup.
And finally she realized that homeopathic slowly drag her to grave yard.

Answer 1

I know, I am a not a very good photographer. Yesterday I visited Zita’s aunt. I got a shock. I cant explain it in words. She looks like she has turned into mummy. She doesn’t look too good. I shot some pictures for (for your better understanding) you. I hope you will get them tomorrow. She burned herself. She can’t even walk properly. It should be clear who is responsible for it. The so called doctor is liable. This is his fault. Rayan is out of order. He is spoiled. Every day he fights with his mother. It’s a terrible situation. Today I again will meet with Zita’s aunt and I am bringing Rayan with me.

Another shocking bit of news is that Banod uncle was hijacked and badly injured. His eye condition is very bad. I suggested that he get some rest but he will not listen to me.
What can I do? I can’t force him.
Zita’s aunt will stay in Dhaka for her regular checkup.
And finally she realised that homeopathic medicine is no good and will slowly put her in the graveyard.

Answer 2

Try this.

I know I am not good in photography.
Yesterday I visited Aunt Zina and got a shock. I cannot explain it in words. She turned into a mummy. I shot some pictures for you so that you can better understand. I hope that you will get it tomorrow. She burned herself and can’t walk properly. It should be clear who is responsible for it. The so-called doctor must get punished.

Rayan is out of order. He spoiled himself. Every day he fights with his mother. It’s a terrible situation. Today I will bring Rayan with me again to meet with Aunt Zita.

More shocking, is that Uncle Banod was hijacked and deadly injured. His eye condition is very bad. I suggested him to rest, but he does not pay a penny of attention to me.
What can I do? I can’t force him.
Aunt Zita will stay in Dhaka for her regular checkup.
I think that finally she realizes that homeopathic slowly dragging her to the grave yard.

Answer 3

I know, I am not good AT photography.
Last day, A visit for Zina aunt, I got a shock. I canNOT explain it in WORDSwoed. She turnED into a mummy. I SHOTshoot some pictures for (for your better understanding) you. Hope, you will get it tomorrow. She burnT herself. Even, she can't walk properly. It should be clear who is responsible for it and hence THE so called doctor must BE punishED.

Rayan is out of order. He spoilED himself. Every day he fightS with his mother. It’s a terrible situation. Today, I again mEt Zita aunt and brOUGHT Rayan with me.

Another shocking news is THAT Banod uncle was hijacked and dSERIOUSLY injured. THE CONDITION OF HIS EYE IS VERY BADHis eye condition is very bad. I suggestED him rest but he dID not pay THE SLIGHTEST attention to me.
What can I do? I cant force him.
Zita aunt will stay in Dhaka for her regular checkup.
And finally she HAS realized that homeopathY wOULD slowly drag her to THE grave yard.


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Answer 4

I know that I am not good at photography.
It is the last day for Aunt Zina's visit. I got a shock. I can explain it in words. She turned into a mummy. I shot some pictures for you(so that you can easily understand). I hope that you will get them tomorrow. She burned herself. Even she can't walk properly. It should be clear who is responsible for it, and the so-called doctor must be punished.

Rayan is out of order. He spoiled himself. Everyday, he fights with his mother. It’s a terrible situation. Today, I meet again with Aunt Zita and I will bring Rayan with me.

Even more shocking news is that Banod's uncle was kidnapped and critically injured. His eye condition is very bad. I suggested to him that he rest but he will not pay any attention to me.
What can I do? I can't force him.
Aunt Zita will stay in Dhaka for her regular check-up.
Finally, she realized that homeopathic medicine is slowly dragging her to the grave yard.