Sweet Dreams
I want this girl can’t you see
How much she means to me
And I can’t get her hard as I try
But my feelings for her will never die
I just wish I could get the chance
To take her to one last dance
So I’ll pray now to the man up above
To spend one night with the girl I love
(Chorus)
Many chances I have had
None end good all end bad
But if I could get that one night
I would make everything right
I’d give the world to this girl
Diamonds, clothes, jewelry, and pearls
Do anything to see her smile
To have a chance
I must be in denial
Somehow I passed the test
Asked her out and she said yes
Perfect is how it has to be
If not then she’ll forget about me
Eight p.m. rolls around
I pick her up for a night on the town
Walk up and knock on the door
It opens up and the crowd starts to roar
She’s so beautiful it’s almost painful
Cause I’m in love with an angel
She’s perfect: smart, funny, and kind
I could stare at her till the end of time
(Chorus 2x)
Now it’s time to take her home
Ignore the calls that I get on my phone
Spend as much time with her as I can
Because a chance like this will never happen again
She says what a good time she had
I reply it wasn’t half bad
And in for the kiss I lean
That’s when I wake…
Up from my dream
2006-10-05 15:50:47 · 20 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
awwww... i think it is realy sweet. If i guy sang that to me i think all my clothes would be coming off!!!! haha
2006-10-06 16:42:31 · answer #1 · answered by not2shabby abby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a guys perspective. First of all i see the point your getting at, but if you give this to a girl with lyrical tallent she'll tear it apart, the wods are weak and you have taken different songs and made them into one, its good but could be better, don't try so hard to rhyme and be original, a good writter will write a song a hundread different ways, keep at it, remeber this is just an opinion.
2006-10-05 22:56:42 · answer #2 · answered by jason 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very sweet but the thing is unless you have a iller voice dont sing it just give it to her biys singing for you or at least when it happened to me was embarrassing cause it was so public i think most of us would like somthing like that in the form of a love note youll never know how much a girl will cherish a love note from her man
2006-10-05 22:54:43 · answer #3 · answered by a perfectly contradictory cat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would think you are obssessed and depressed.
Write the song in a positive tone...like as if you believe she IS yours because your song has flattered her...Not like your song has flattened your heart! Good Luck!
2006-10-05 22:58:44 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would think it was sweet of you to take your time out to write a song for me. I would think your real romantic. I would feel real special. I would think your a nice guy.
2006-10-05 22:59:39 · answer #5 · answered by teeka 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats sweet! but define "spending the night" with her. don't talk about sex yet buddy! the man upstairs wont want you to have sex. that would be called "fornication" which is a sin. ok...just thought you might wanna know!
2006-10-05 22:56:11 · answer #6 · answered by Becky S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was one of the most beautiful things i have ever heard. if some guy sang that to me i think i would just cry. i hope whoever you sing this too loves you the same. i think i would, good luck!!!
2006-10-05 22:57:20 · answer #7 · answered by Ali 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwwww that is so sweet. who ever you are you did an amazing job with that song Email me hrrsrvn@yahoo.com
2006-10-05 22:56:07 · answer #8 · answered by poohpooh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good!Girl always like this type of songs.Go on !
2006-10-05 22:53:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not so bad... Even better than some hit songs..... Keep trying....
2006-10-05 23:19:29 · answer #10 · answered by Jasmine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋