I have looked into the void
Faced my foolish fears.
Accepted what must be.
Thrown away selfish tears.
Life is sweet and precious.
Beautiful, wonderous and true.
All is as it should be.
God will see me through.
There is nothing I fear now.
Nothing I cannot face.
I know the Path I travel.
I have been given His Grace.
Peace is mine this moment.
Eternity is within my reach.
But I have much still to do here.
Life has more to teach.
2006-10-05 00:08:44 · 15 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
It proves I was right, that you feel better today and things have changed...all it needed was a little time.
2006-10-05 00:13:23 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 6⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful!
2006-10-05 08:56:39 · answer #2 · answered by ms.melancholy 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Is it yours? Its kind of pretty, but in my opinion is a bit bland. It describes how you feel certainly but gives no great emotion or evoke much feeling in me. I would perhaps take this as a first draft, and set to modifying it and injecting a little bit more passion into it through stonger language and perhaps playing around with the rythm and tempo a bit. out of 10 I would give it a 6.
2006-10-05 07:18:18 · answer #3 · answered by tarri 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I reminds me of people whom have experienced a troublesome Heart and realized that God has reached out his arms to offer his Grace, and this person finally knows how precious Salvation is, and realizes what their purpose is, and they are willing to go forward in God's Love, trusting his Love.
2006-10-05 07:17:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
wonderful Debra and quite a powerful poem that would be of benefit to others who are going through a hard time
perhaps on a depression site etc ... to give people hope and meaning in their life
2006-10-05 07:13:16 · answer #5 · answered by Peace 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's a beautiful depiction of someone who has overcome the trials of yesterday and is facing today with renewed hope and strength.
2006-10-05 07:12:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
life is not only a teaching but a learning process as well. there are many teachers who say they learn much from a student as they are teaching the student. good point in this poem.
2006-10-05 07:15:28 · answer #7 · answered by Marvin R 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
why do you need to live forever?
"eternity is within my reach" and "foolish fears" seems to contradict one another.
The only truth is, you are born ad you die. what you do with the time in between is in your command. Don't throw it away on foolishness.
Be selfish, meaning take care of your self. imagining alternative realities, sacrifices your sanity.
2006-10-05 07:38:11 · answer #8 · answered by Real Friend 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
this is REALLY g0od.. are y0u like a p0et 0r s0mething?! its g0od =] i like h0w y0u talk ab0ut g0d and the path that y0u travel and ab0ut y0u having still much t0 d0, ect. its REALLY g0od and all s0 TRUE. g0d bless!!
2006-10-05 07:12:56 · answer #9 · answered by ud0wne4this 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you have a big decision to make. Good luck.
2006-10-05 07:12:22 · answer #10 · answered by tikizgirl 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋