I believe celestial music fills our life with love, and the night sky with stars.
Any ideas?
2006-10-04 12:11:53 · 8 answers · asked by Cookie777 6 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Either change "our" to "my" or change "life" to "lives". Take out the "I believe". It's a poem; it's divinely inspired; it's certainty written beautifully. Talk about how it fills your life w/love, etc. Describe the music and relate it to the stars. It can definitely lead to a lovely religious poem.
This post makes me think of the song "Stars" from Les Miserables
2006-10-04 12:15:57 · answer #1 · answered by lalasnake 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I believe celestial music
fills our life with love,
and the night with stars.
Jesus is a dove,
fueling holy wars.
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2006-10-04 12:16:31 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Celestial music played by the night sky
Fills my heart with life and love,
But it's always a young alter boy
That I'm left thinking of.
2006-10-04 12:15:49 · answer #3 · answered by joeiacovino 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'd take out celestial 'cause its an earthly thing but...maybe....it's a good start...............
.......I believe in angels from above to guide us through all of lifes storms etc etc use i believe at the start of each saying and keep it in prose and who knows what will show
2006-10-04 12:23:18 · answer #4 · answered by stygianwolfe 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
chook and feathers to me are female characteristics. Dickinson would have been a Feminist, in her thinking. desire to her is a chook that's heard maximum sweetest from the midsection while existence is the toughest, as in a hurricane. desire could be heard while existence turns into heartless and chilly or while people develop into distant for no logical reason. whether, people will by no potential ask for desire, even while they're in dire desire of a few.
2016-10-01 22:50:15 · answer #5 · answered by regula 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sing aloud unto God our strength, make a joyful noise unto the Lord all ye lands, Serve the Lord with gladness, come before his presence with singing. O Lord my God, thou are very great; thou are clothed with honor and majesty. And the Angels cried Holy, Holy, Holy is the Lord of Hosts ,as the lamp shining in a dark place, as the morning star arises in your hearts
2006-10-04 12:29:06 · answer #6 · answered by sunny 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Did you know that the last word of each section of Dante's Divine Comedy is (the Tuscan word for) "stars"?
2006-10-04 12:15:21 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
No, but it could turn out to be a rather good song.
2006-10-04 12:14:16 · answer #8 · answered by J9 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋