I'd appreciate your opinion before I send it to him:-
Let’s spend time together
Hanging here and there
Mobbing the floor
Running to the store
Opening and closing the kitchen door
I am not desperate baby!
You know that very well
I have so many guys to choose from
Yea I do!
And they treat me more than they should
The guys I am talking about are not
Kris and Mat
You talked about me behind my back!
Remember!
Now I can’t date them anymore!
So as a reprimand
Let’s spend time together
Just like before
Hanging here and there
Mobbing the floor
Running to the store
Opening and closing the kitchen door
P.s: I am hopnig that this is the boom!
2006-10-03 16:38:05 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
Three words; Strip-O-Gram
and you might wanna consider getting this tattooed on you too. that always sends a clear message....
2006-10-03 18:48:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I'm not trying to be mean, but....I didn't like it much. It was too confusing to follow. If it's not going to rhyme, it needs to at least tell a story, which unfortunately yours doesn't. All it does it make you sound desperate and make you sound like you can't get over him. Seriously, I'm not trying to be nasty. As someone else said, get over the guy and move on. I'm sure you're an intelligent person. Use that intelligence to show other guys out there how great you are. Of course, you don't NEED a guy in your life. Empower yourself.
2006-10-03 17:11:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
im 14 I even have 3 lobe piercings on each ear and a nostril piercing and to be honest i like them lots, i'm thinking getting a 4th lobe piercing (with needle because of the fact it touches slightly cartriliage) i think of they should not be judged upon as rebellious, that's resourceful and expressive. additionally it shows who they're. i won't be in a position to stand people who hate them, it is not their face/physique, so not their subject
2016-10-01 22:05:17 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Baby you are such a jerk
Not writing any more poems that make me beserk
I am kicking you to the curb
I think that I am really peturbed
2006-10-03 16:41:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I really don't think that any guy would like that poem.You should more concentrate on him,not on how many guys you have around.
2006-10-03 16:41:33 · answer #5 · answered by nataliya 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
stop crying like the cat though move on
2006-10-03 16:40:44 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummm... well, its interesting but i jusst want to know what mobbing the floor means
2006-10-03 19:13:11 · answer #7 · answered by monk_e_chic 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I guess I just don't appreciate poetry. Sorry.
2006-10-03 16:50:17 · answer #8 · answered by Papa 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad.but not so good enough.
but u can give it to him he will like it cause U wrote it
2006-10-03 16:46:20 · answer #9 · answered by mark 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'm not skilled to answer
2006-10-03 16:40:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋