Sweet Dreams
I want this girl can’t you see
How much she means to me
And I can’t get her hard as I try
But my feelings for her will never die
I just wish I could get the chance
To take her to one last dance
So I’ll pray now to the man up above
To spend one night with the girl I love
(Chorus)
Many chances I have had
None end good all end bad
But if I could get that one night
I would make everything right
I’d give the world to this girl
Diamonds, clothes, jewelry, and pearls
Do anything to see her smile
To have a chance
I must be in denial
Somehow I passed the test
Asked her out and she said yes
Perfect is how it has to be
If not then she’ll forget about me
Eight p.m. rolls around
I pick her up for a night on the town
Walk up and knock on the door
It opens up and the crowd starts to roar
She’s so beautiful it’s almost painful
Cause I’m in love with an angel
She’s perfect: smart, funny, and kind
I could stare at her till the end of time
(Chorus 2x)
Now it’s time to take her home
Ignore the calls that I get on my phone
Spend as much time with her as I can
Because a chance like this will never happen again
She says what a good time she had
I reply it wasn’t half bad
And in for the kiss I lean
That’s when I wake…
Up from my dream
2006-10-03 03:48:46 · 18 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I really like ur song. It is nice to know that a man can feel that way. I hope u do find ur dream.I hope she sees how special u r to care that much for her.
2006-10-03 03:58:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
A little sophomoric as far as I'm concerned. But if you were to sing it to a girl you love she would be very touched by the fact that you wrote a song for her.
2006-10-03 10:52:10 · answer #2 · answered by St.Anger 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ahaa... Nice song for Tamil cinema if you allow them to translate.
2006-10-03 10:51:28 · answer #3 · answered by mswathi1025 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
honestly it's beautiful. I read it like it was a poem and i wish i could have heard it as a song.
2006-10-03 10:53:01 · answer #4 · answered by nichelle b 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like the fact that you wrote it to her its very cute and the song i completely love it!!!
2006-10-03 10:54:20 · answer #5 · answered by *********** 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's great, maybe too long though. My sister's a songwriter, she probably would know best. Good job though.
2006-10-03 10:52:27 · answer #6 · answered by Tasha 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
remember that you are writing it to a four beat sok, maybe something like. "I want this girl,OH,can't you see.JUST,how much she means to me. four beats.syncopation. try it with the rest of the song.
2006-10-03 10:57:46 · answer #7 · answered by onelonevoice 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really love it. i would love to hear the music and hear you sing it. you need to give it to the girl you rreally like. she would love it as much as i do
2006-10-03 10:55:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Stalker alert!
2006-10-03 10:50:53 · answer #9 · answered by bill m 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Great!!!!! I would like to receive a song Like this.
Good Luck !!!!!!
2006-10-03 10:53:07 · answer #10 · answered by marque1717 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋