Sweet Dreams
I want this girl can’t you see
How much she means to me
And I can’t get her hard as I try
But my feelings for her will never die
I just wish I could get the chance
To take her to one last dance
So I’ll pray now to the man up above
To spend one night with the girl I love
(Chorus)
Many chances I have had
None end good all end bad
But if I could get that one night
I would make everything right
I’d give the world to this girl
Diamonds, clothes, jewelry, and pearls
Do anything to see her smile
To have a chance
I must be in denial
Somehow I passed the test
Asked her out and she said yes
Perfect is how it has to be
If not then she’ll forget about me
Eight p.m. rolls around
I pick her up for a night on the town
Walk up and knock on the door
It opens up and the crowd starts to roar
She’s so beautiful it’s almost painful
Cause I’m in love with an angle
She’s perfect: smart, funny, and kind
I could stare at her till the end of time
(Chorus 2x)
Now it’s time to take her home
Ignore the calls that I get on my phone
Spend as much time with her as I can
Because a chance like this will never happen again
She says what a good time she had
I reply it wasn’t half bad
And in for the kiss I lean
That’s when I wake…
Up from my dream
2006-10-02 13:31:52 · 17 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
As a writer and a girl, I think that was awesome! You have a lot of potential & if my man wrote that for me, I'd probably strip for him right there on the spot! He'd definately get lucky that night!
2006-10-02 13:38:04 · answer #1 · answered by tigerlily27 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
First of all is this a girl that you have ever dated or ever even spoke to? Or is this a girl that you have dated before and it didn't last or you are currently dating? We need more info to answer this correctly. If you have never spoke to her...then you are stalker material and it will scare her. If she knows u like her and she likes you, then SCORE! That was really beautiful.
2006-10-02 20:51:13 · answer #2 · answered by all_304 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was really nice!!! I think it really shows your feelings a lot. If you gave this to me I would tell you that you did a really good job writing it!!!
2006-10-02 20:41:49 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
this sounds so beautiful to me! i think you are a lucky person if he gave this to you. if he wrote this from his own heart, i think you have his. go for it and embrace your future and have fun!
couldn't hurt to give him a try. sounds like he is really into you.
give him a shot.
2006-10-02 20:43:29 · answer #4 · answered by lrfoster7 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh my god, that's so sweet, damn i wish a guy wrote something like that for me. Consider your self lucky.
2006-10-02 20:50:02 · answer #5 · answered by jaylee 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think that's beautiful! I'd really think that he liked me if he wrote that for me.
2006-10-02 20:34:28 · answer #6 · answered by SwinkSS 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Wo0O0oOw he's sooo much into you...
show him girl that you care:)
2006-10-02 20:38:53 · answer #7 · answered by sweet cherry78 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
im not a girl but i think its really good
2006-10-02 20:37:18 · answer #8 · answered by monkeyrocker100 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Wow did you wright that!!!!Pretty good I would read that all over and over again!!!!LOL
2006-10-02 20:36:45 · answer #9 · answered by I luv my BF! 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
id think that is the cutest thing ever.
2006-10-02 20:44:36 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋