There lies a mountain before you
Do not fear the climb
Stretch your arms toward heaven
You will encounter peace of mind.
The task before you is daunting
The challenge you must face.
You will have strength for all needs
You will be supplied that grace.
Never mind the distance
Do not heed the height
You will reach the summit
Before day turns into night.
This journey is important
You must go it alone
But we are all here cheering
And we will welcome you home
2006-10-02 03:51:56 · 19 answers · asked by Debra M. Wishing Peace To All 7 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Yes I wrote it a week or two ago.
2006-10-02 03:54:41 · update #1
Atheism resides at the top of that mountain. Ive climbed it and that is what I found. Hope that doesn't disappoint you.
2006-10-02 03:54:13 · answer #1 · answered by Real Friend 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see that one person found atheism at the top. Interestingly I climbed that same mountain and found Jesus on the cross at the top, laying down His life for my sins. He/she must have been looking the wrong direction?
Cool poem! Very encouraging.
2006-10-02 10:57:15 · answer #2 · answered by Alex T 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That was written by an English General who
gave a copy to all Soldiers, on the Western
Front.....
2006-10-02 10:58:00 · answer #3 · answered by Moonlite gambler 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I like the poem it speaks of a christians walk through life. Very good.
2006-10-02 10:55:24 · answer #4 · answered by wolfy1 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
One of the few bright things in life that I see. Its really inspiring
Honestly I think you have a future in poetry...keep writing.
2006-10-02 11:02:18 · answer #5 · answered by betterdeadthansorry 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's interesting and thought provoking, but you seem unsure of your rhyming pattern. It comes and it goes. I've found it's always best to pick to rhyme or not but not mix and match. Good though!
2006-10-02 11:10:18 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful.
Ignore "trustauto", he obviously doesn't understand atheism any better than christianity, or he'd know that with atheism, there is no "top of that mountain", there's nothing.
2006-10-02 10:56:55 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like that poem. Its very nice. I hope everyone like sit to. And it could maybe change someones mind on God and turn them to Him.
2006-10-02 10:54:35 · answer #8 · answered by Mia 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its pendantic and inane. It has neither rhythym, nor structure. It's rhyming scheme is plodding and unsophisticated.
2006-10-02 10:59:42 · answer #9 · answered by corvuequis 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's a good poem
2006-10-02 11:01:23 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋