depends on ur age.. if that's a poem made up by a high schooler or older is kinda sad lol *NO offense* it has meaning and all but it doesn't flow.. u can probably make it better
2006-09-30 16:11:47
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answered by Anonymous
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I really like this one too! And, I've taken many chances, made many mistakes, and changed a lot. All to finally become happy. Ironic how all of your poems remind me of the same girl.. Keep writing, because it is giving me the best of thoughts of my <3
2006-09-30 16:16:51
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answered by Zack D 1
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that is so intense i visit't look ahead to Kels to get right here. I see her and my strengths are in decline, crashing to the floor as does my silken frock. i do not spare or care about time yet observe that's 9 O'Clock. "we are able to cry later my warmth, sweet tater, immediately i favor your enfolding, a lot as a glove. Lay with me steamed and sweaty till it grows a lot later, morning will upward push again, lengthy after we make love."
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answered by Anonymous
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It starts as a poem and ends as a narrative. There are some real possibilities, though.
2006-09-30 16:12:43
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answered by oatie 6
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Its iright, keep up the good work XD
2006-09-30 16:11:34
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answered by AppleSoda 4
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WE ALL LEARN THINGS BECAUSE OF LOVE. AND THAT HELPS US TO GROW UP.
2006-09-30 16:12:54
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answered by Anonymous
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Nice keep it on!
2006-09-30 16:13:12
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answered by jazzy108 1
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lovely and creative
2006-09-30 16:14:06
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answered by Black 1
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I hate poetry.
2006-09-30 16:11:57
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answered by imnotbtami 5
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very nice! what you need is juz more practice ;)
2006-09-30 16:14:44
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answered by Lucia 2
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