Time can take it's toll on the best of us
Look at you you're growing old so young
Traffic lights blink at you in the evening
Tilt your head and turn it to the sun
Sometimes the T.V. is like a lover
Singing softly as you fall asleep
You wake up in the morning and it's still there
Adding up the things you'll never be
Alright, I can say what you want me to,
Alright, I can do all the things you do,
Alright, I'll make it all up for you,
I'm still in love with you,
I'm still in love with you
2006-09-29 12:39:01 · 11 answers · asked by Ashley 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Time and tide wait for none; but for love. o.k.
2006-09-30 03:36:22 · answer #1 · answered by prince47 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't seem to rhyme. Isn't a poem supposed to rhyme? Also, I don't get the part about the traffic lights. What's that all about?
2006-09-29 19:48:50 · answer #2 · answered by ErnestoV 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's original.
2006-09-29 19:45:20 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats ok cant u come up with something original or maybe u can become a song writer for a new artist
2006-09-29 19:41:38 · answer #4 · answered by Scott R 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
If it's for me, yes. I do like it. It makes you sound desperate, which is exactly how I want you to be, when you think about me.
2006-09-29 19:42:30 · answer #5 · answered by 1/6,833,020,409 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5 out of 10 , not bad but its o.k.
2006-09-29 19:45:48 · answer #6 · answered by Daniel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YES, THE BEAUTY OF POETRY IS THAT IT CAN MEAN ANYTHING THE READER WANTS TO TO MEAN...KEEP WRITING
2006-09-29 19:45:30 · answer #7 · answered by basskickinmama 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if my boyfriend said that to me i could promise wed be together for awhile.
2006-09-29 19:42:13 · answer #8 · answered by lothargrl_4_life 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it...its very nice.
2006-09-29 19:44:11 · answer #9 · answered by jessdjnick 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like this, I really do, did u write it??
2006-09-29 19:42:09 · answer #10 · answered by blueyedfaerydoll 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋