please rate from 1 - 10 (10 is the highest) my deck in yu-gi-oh and please make any comment?

Question

-17monstercards-
2x Despair in the dark
3x Ryu Kokki
3x Pyramid Turtle
1x Royal Keeper
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Drillroid
1x Jinzo
1x Otohime
1x Sangan
1x Magician of faith
1x Des Lacooda
-16Spell-
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Creature Swap
1x Lightning VOrtex
3x Book of Life
1x Heavy Storm
1x Giant trunade
1x Mystical Space Typoon
2x Call of the Mummy
1X Premature Burial
1x Swords of Reveling Light
1x Graceful Charity
1x Fissure
1x United We Stand
-13trap-
1xcall of the haunted
1xraigeki break
1xbottomlesstraphole
1xmagic cylinder
1xtorrential tribute
2xdusttornado
1xmagicjammer
1xmirrorforce
1xceasefire
3x compulsary evacation device
46allcard-

-sidedeck-
1xkycootheghostdestroyer
1xreflectbounder
2xroyalkeeper
2xdeckdevastationvirus
1xdusttornado
2x great dezard
1x fushioh richie
2x vampire lord
2x vampire curse
1x skilldrain
-15cards-

Answer 1

8/10. Why? 46 cards is too much but you kept your Side Deck to a minimum of 15 cards, great! Monsters - Put 3 Cyber Dragons, drop one Despair from the Dark, and add in Magician of Faith. Spells - All great choices! Traps - Have only one of each: Call of the Haunted, Bottomless Trap Hole, Torrential Tribute, Dust Tornado. The Side Deck seems like there are great choices there, but replace the two Vampire Curse for two Polymerization cards. Why? Remember the Cyber Dragons I mentioned? Put in your Fusion Deck - Cyber Twin Dragon and Cyber End Dragon, one each. Make sure you go to www.yugioh-card.com and go to the Forbidden List link and look at that list because you have cards in you deck that they wont let you play in official events. OK? Happy Dueling!