I've always wanted to do this!!! I'll start the story and whoever answers next will write ONLY ONE paragraph and we'll see how the story turns out! And whoever writes the most interesting one, I'll pick.
I gazed around at the view before me, shaded by the outside world, in the grove I felt safe. The corners of my vision blurred as I was exposed to patches of the burning ball of fire. Thin lines, almost invisible to my occupied mind, flew past in waves flowing in the wind, it took me a while to realized my hair had also gone to the rythmic symphany of this peaceful forest.
2006-09-28 12:43:00 · 4 answers · asked by mysteriousmystery 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I tried to think of the comforting flame again but for some reason the more I tried to recall the less I remembered. Suddenly for no apparent reason I felt a sharp jolt in every joint and muscle in my body. I awoke in a grey, confusing world knee deep a viscous, grimy substance that almost immediately made feel a hundred pounds heavier. The memory of the comforting flame, the tasty peach the ecstasy of color was now just that; a fond memory of things passed too long ago. And now that warmth that comfort was little more than a spiteful burn.
2006-09-28 16:14:25 · answer #1 · answered by Rick R 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I then noticed some movement and soon realized that a doe and two fawns had entered my line of vision. The doe would graze for a moment and then lift her head using all her keen senses while the fawns continued to graze as though without a need for fear at all. Soon the doe gracefully walked on while her two charges followed. Even though I had sat motionless during this event, I thought it was possible the doe had detected a foreign scent in this otherwise peaceful haven.
2006-09-28 20:05:26 · answer #2 · answered by Oenophile... (Lynn) 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A peach, lushly round and ripe to the touch hung in a tempting, saucy way from a leafy branch, just begging to be chosen. I reached up to it and felt it almost pull itself down to me. The fire kissed it and said goodbye as I felt the warmth and juice of nature.
2006-09-28 19:53:24 · answer #3 · answered by MissHazel 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Naa... that's okay, I'll pass!
Personally, I don't get it, so I can't very well elaborate on it even to have it make some sense.
2006-09-28 19:52:32 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋