My heart is in it's original home
again today
I am alone
2006-09-28 09:35:23 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
I think it is a great start.
2006-09-28 09:46:29 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's not my thing.
It seems a little forced, like the author is TRYING to force emotions.
It's quite emo/depressive.
It could be MUCHO better.
2006-09-28 09:43:04 · answer #2 · answered by FaZizzle 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That one's not bad. Kind of cute.
There's something wrong with the rhythm, though. Can't quite put my finger on it.
2006-09-28 12:24:33 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kinda childlike actually. But, ok I guess.
2006-09-28 09:44:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like you just gave someone the boot
2006-09-28 09:39:58 · answer #5 · answered by Say It Again M'am 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well if its ur 1st written poem
well
mmmmm
2 short but cute!
2006-09-28 09:44:46 · answer #6 · answered by Now Or Never 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad
2006-09-28 09:41:44 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its okay
2006-09-28 10:13:45 · answer #8 · answered by vick 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
okay
2006-09-28 09:41:01 · answer #9 · answered by Freeman 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋