Declan Knowing that the day would come. Not believing. its not true I will always have you and you will be always there
And then the clock Hit 2. Not believing becoming Believing. Feeling like if you stole my hart. Knowing you ware always there. Then feel loan and empty
As the storm hit like if it was the end of the world. And the wind punching it way truethe trees. Like if I was trying to find you way home
Then I see you just like if you ware sleeping like if you ware a kid with your mum by your side. Knowing not going to see you again
Wishing and wishing. That I could se you one last time
Only time I see you when I dream of you.
Each time I. a wake. Like lose you all over again
Hart brokering. Hart broke in to a million pieces. Just asking
To see you one last times. Not a million.
Can’t go on seeing you like that.
When ever I see the Reds I will always remember you
Or when I pass true Old Trafford. With a tire drop down my eye
Know that if there was one place you would be. You be there watch them win with a cheer and love passing true the stadium.
All I wanted to do was say goodbye and talk to you one last time. So I can remember you as happy not a dieing boy. Didn’t even get to say se you later or a hug one last time
Know that one day we will meet again. Till then. Goodbye. With a tire drop. Know that my love for you will be always there or when I dream about you. Be losing you one more time knowing that your knock on havens door. But there was no need to knock. For it was already opened.
2006-09-28 08:09:17 · 10 answers · asked by drkombmisack 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
THat was really great!
u r good at poems!!
Hope that u make some more!
Rock on!
2006-09-28 08:20:54 · answer #1 · answered by pirateluver 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
needs some paintings. The sentences are style of uneven. i understand it sounds like an English lesson , yet sentence structure helps. Telling it out loud it could be a touch extra perfect. for my section i do not locate bathing room humor humorous, yet some like it.
2016-12-06 08:03:39 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it because it's a meaningful poem - very sad and emotional
2006-09-28 08:16:10 · answer #3 · answered by Dragon Empress 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very long but its good. If you want to keep my attention, make it alittle shorter. good job.
2006-09-28 08:50:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its lovely, really moving.
2006-09-28 08:35:23 · answer #5 · answered by jean m 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Im not gonna bother reading it
2006-09-28 08:35:28 · answer #6 · answered by AYU 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
thats long man.. the first coupla sentences were good though ;)
2006-09-28 08:12:11 · answer #7 · answered by ToniLianne 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its too long
i cant be asked to rread it all
2006-09-28 08:14:33 · answer #8 · answered by azaa 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2006-09-28 08:40:00 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
That's so sweet!!!!
2006-09-29 09:47:19 · answer #10 · answered by balletgirl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋