Objective: After many years working as a Consultant involved in both long and short term processes, I acquired very useful skills that I’m committed to contributing through a management position in a large organization where I can utilize my experience to meet international professional standards
2006-09-28 02:37:10 · 5 answers · asked by Pipo 1 in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
Try this:
Objective: To be a manager in a large organization where I can use my consulting skills in long and short term processes to meet and exceed international professional standards
2006-09-28 02:42:33 · answer #1 · answered by Brand X 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
try this: I’m committed to contributing my skills through a management position in a large organization where I can utilize my experience to meet high professional standards
2006-09-28 10:01:45 · answer #2 · answered by leapfrog 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Both Leapfrog and BrandX have done a good job of rephrasing your objective. They eliminated the repetition in yours and made it more cooncise. I'd be satisfied with either one!
2006-09-28 11:51:42 · answer #3 · answered by keepsondancing 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like LeapFrog's better :)
Good luck!
2006-09-28 10:28:27 · answer #4 · answered by BevD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like what BrandX wrote better....
2006-09-28 09:46:18 · answer #5 · answered by Barbiq 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋