Guys, thanks for the answers... but try to work on the improved paragraph:
"Along {because it is the third paragraph of my text and it is 'along' the author's work} Bilingualism, Individual {this is the article's name, so I mantained it}, XXXXXXX explains the contributions of the studies on bilingualism under different sciences. He {the author} introduces the reader to concepts related to the bilingual’s linguistic behavior (Psychology), to the subject matters of Psycholinguistics of Bilingualism as well as to the Neurolinguistics of Bilingualism’s."
Now I think you can understand it better.
Ie
2006-09-27 10:17:25 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
Nope, no clue what you're talking about.
2006-09-27 10:25:31 · answer #1 · answered by monger187 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Instead of putting "he {the author}" Try just "The author" it makes things simpler and has a better flow to it.
2006-09-27 18:13:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Take all the parenthetical phrases out. Nobody wants to read around those.
2006-09-27 17:37:25 · answer #3 · answered by MaryBridget G 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i have no clue what you are trying to say
2006-09-27 18:23:20 · answer #4 · answered by cary 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋