I posted a poem i wrote for my bf. I asked what did people think about that. Was it wrong to ask people's opinion? was it not a question?
Poem for my bf who's thousand miles away.
Lying on my bed
Dreaming in a daze
Listening for your voice
And wanting your embrace
Missing your kisses
Wishing you were here
Waiting for the day
When you will be near
When that day comes
I will feel your embrace
With tear filled eyes
As we are face to face.
I miss you and good night.
2006-09-24 20:32:22 · 10 answers · asked by ? 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Yahoo! Answers are idiots and not fair!
They make victims out of the innocent and not the all-round dirty and stupid!
A simple and beautiful poem!
It should turn your guy on!
I hope he is not getting up to fun without you-that's backstabbing!
Have you got your own website? With all your poems, etc?
Make it pretty!
(Please put up the link or word access on 'Extra Details' please!)
You'll have heaps of fans!
Are you a singer aswell?
Where are you from?
Did you notice you lost well-earned points after receiving your "violation"? Me, too! The asses!
2006-09-24 20:38:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have a good talent to write poems , especially that it has the soul of our time that respects material pleasure and satisfaction , But my dear you have to read more of the English, American and international literature to develop your talent
2006-09-25 03:51:03 · answer #2 · answered by Nilehawk 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I wish someone would wright a pome like for me. I loved it He's a very lucky man.
2006-09-25 04:24:27 · answer #3 · answered by robert d 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your BF is a very lucky guy.
2006-09-25 08:01:25 · answer #4 · answered by Mr. BIG 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't know. It is a great poem.
2006-09-25 03:36:14 · answer #5 · answered by Don W 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
what a poem...u miss him a lot huh?dun worry,i will company u
2006-09-25 03:35:32 · answer #6 · answered by ReeZ C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Because it wasn't really a question, I'd say. I didn't even bother reading it all. I'm not into poetry.
2006-09-25 03:34:46 · answer #7 · answered by sarah071267 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
love it, P.S you cute, poem sexy. keep up the good work.
2006-09-25 03:36:25 · answer #8 · answered by tacohead 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its really nice one yukiko!.
somebody might have been mistakenly reported.don't bother.
2006-09-25 03:36:28 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it may have been removed as it's a tad hallmark...
2006-09-25 03:35:39 · answer #10 · answered by dirtyapev2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋