umm my other novel's r done got any ideas?

Question

i have writtten a fairytalish novel about two friends who turn out to be sisters in the 7th imension which is alternate universe it also in the end turns ou to be a dream but they r nt sure sence they r meting peopl from their dream the other one i worte was about a secret agent who falls in love with the guy she is supposed to be tracking down bad hing is is he is falling in love with her back....anyideas?

look people it is the net do u really think i would write a book like this? heaven forbid i am not that stupid!,,,,,thanks for the advice but i dont write everything short hand you know it just happens when i am on he internet.>.< i know it is bad but i really am trying to stop.........

Answer 1

I myself am a writer, probably just like you are. We write because of are great ideas that roll across are genius brains.
The fact is it seems that you lack sufficient English skills, as I do.
I would dedicate more time to editing your book.
I know that it's different then typing over the net, but dear God you need to slow down a bit!
Have you ever read Lois Duncans' "Stranger with my face."
The main character finds out she has a twin sister, that she was adopted and also that her sister can astral project.
It's a very intriguing book, just like yours sounds.
For it to be successful it most have good English and grammar.
I myself get thrown away like a plastic dinner plate, because I do not apply myself to edit enough.
Please take my provocative advice and hire an editor if you have the cash to do so.

Answer 2

Ah. You are the one that I answered before? Well anyways, I would also try out things that are more realistic. I mean, history wise. Its always good to have a variety of choices out there. You have two fairytales and such, that are actually...somewhat realistic but not really. I think that you should either do that or stay to the course of the fairytale novels. You could also start a series. Take Janet Evanovich, she's one of my fav. authors at the moment. She has a series (the Stephine Plum series) and they are SO GOOD! Anyways, they have around the same story line, yet its different enough to still be interesting.

Answer 3

couple of choices - - you can try the traditional route of submitting to an agent etc via query letter and if they are interested, sending them samples of the writing etc. [ but please be sure it is grammatically perfect or they will toss it real fast ]

or -

It is relatively inexpensive to self publish these days as they have on demand printing and you can even print one at a time as you sell them..

good luck

Answer 4

I think you should do more work on it. Real writers usually write in proper English.