Your Love is as if water, Life giving to my soul, and Just being in your presense is like bread, feeding my heart with Love.
Your beauty is like the blooming of the roses during the warm spring and your touch is like the gentle breeze that crisps my skin.
Your voice is like the soft sound of the ocean waves during the rising sun, Calm, Gentle and Peaceful.
yes, many other men can afford to buy you many pretty treasures, but the treassure i bear is the love in which I have for you and it lays within my heart, and in turn i offer my heart and all of its fruits to you and noone else.
2006-09-24 06:49:56 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Where did ya copy this poem from?
2006-09-24 06:52:59 · answer #1 · answered by AYU 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It'd be prettier with correct spelling.
Your Love is as if water, Life giving to my soul, and Just being in your presence is like bread, feeding my heart with Love.
Your beauty is like the blooming of the roses during the warm spring and your touch is like the gentle breeze that crisps my skin.
Your voice is like the soft sound of the ocean waves during the rising sun, Calm, Gentle and Peaceful.
yes, many other men can afford to buy you many pretty treasures, but the treasure i bear is the love in which I have for you and it lays within my heart, and in turn i offer my heart and all of its fruits to you and no one else.
2006-09-24 06:52:34 · answer #2 · answered by nikkimccarty 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well it's nice -- did he make it up himself or copy it from somewhere?
Regardless, it sounds good -- but do his actions bear out that he truly regards you this highly?
Actions speak louder than words (and poems are just words).
Also -- hopefully this does not mean that he won't spend money on you!
2006-09-24 06:52:22 · answer #3 · answered by DD 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-17 21:36:55 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Id probly wonder whether 1. he was gay or 2. where he stole the poem from
2006-09-24 06:51:53 · answer #5 · answered by sandee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I he actually wrote this, I'd hang on to him. Love is much more precious than money. Anyone who would write his live like this is worth a million!
2006-09-24 06:53:36 · answer #6 · answered by cowboys21angel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love it, but would not like the fact you would share it with the whole world before sharing it with me
2006-09-24 06:52:59 · answer #7 · answered by Cherie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
booorring. too typical, lacks any true emotion. looks like something pulled off of a poem generator. sorry kiddo.
2006-09-24 06:52:35 · answer #8 · answered by Megan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my heart would be filled with love,my eyes will me misty with tears and my lips will be starving for you hot kisses.
2006-09-24 06:57:38 · answer #9 · answered by atahsina 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would melt that is so ummmm can't find words but it would make me feel very wanted its a great poem
2006-09-24 06:53:05 · answer #10 · answered by Kathy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋