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Is there no end to the adventures we could have if we only seek them with our eyes open.Is there no end to the love we could have if we approch it with our hearts instead of our minds.Is there no end to our future,if we totaly commited ourselves to one another.Is there no end to happiness.When I am with you and you are with me.I know with you in my heart.there would never be no empty love,not a missed adventure,not another commitment.There'd never be no end.
do you think a woman would like this poem

2006-09-22 00:18:13 · 11 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships Singles & Dating

Just to let you know the first line was a qoute I got in my email.I turned it into a poem

2006-09-22 00:32:57 · update #1

11 answers

Nice Job!! I like how you twisted it into your our style...
I think any woman would like something like this from her husband/boyfriend, but only if he meant it....

2006-09-23 11:50:13 · answer #1 · answered by AAP0305 5 · 0 0

I love it & any woman with any feelings would love it too. It's absolutely beautiful & sounds like it comes from the heart. To be honest, the fact that you even wrote a poem especially for her will make her go week at the knees. I admire you for being able to show your feelings, not many men do. There should be more men like you !!!

2006-09-22 07:28:20 · answer #2 · answered by EmmaB 3 · 0 0

Absolutely, a woman would love this poem, Very nicely written

2006-09-22 07:22:32 · answer #3 · answered by ? 7 · 0 0

It's a very romantic thought, but no English teacher could read it without cringing. double negatives...ouch.

2006-09-22 07:25:10 · answer #4 · answered by folklore 7 · 0 0

Lovely poem..... I loved it........ the last two lines are romantic it gives some feelings Really I loved it.......

2006-09-22 07:29:30 · answer #5 · answered by Unique 2 · 0 0

Awww!thats sweet!and very touching too...i'd love it.

2006-09-22 07:38:13 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

it's nice, i would like it! :) as long as it came from the heart any woman would like it

2006-09-22 07:20:53 · answer #7 · answered by puppy love 6 · 0 0

if it were me than i would have said "yes" but mind u it should b ur own n not ritten by someone else.

2006-09-22 07:25:44 · answer #8 · answered by imsimplygr8 2 · 0 0

i love it its very awesome go whoever you is hjolla nekajacobs@yahoo.com

2006-09-22 07:58:45 · answer #9 · answered by shawty 2 · 0 0

nice one, but looks too lousy these days..

2006-09-22 07:24:24 · answer #10 · answered by V R G 3 · 0 0

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