A lonely evening night,thoughts of a womans love.
The day that happens in my life,I'll never get enough.
I think of my lonely friend,I wish her oh so near.
I would try to never bring her troubles,not even one single tear.
But how much I'd like to tell her,some sentimentle words of love.
I would never want our nights to be finished,never want our days to be done.
So as I express these words of love,from my heart so very true.
This poem not about myself,each word is all about you.
What would you think if a guy wrote you this poem.Ladies?
2006-09-21 22:03:52 · 13 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
very nice if uit was not enonimus I would go and see him as soon as possible
2006-09-21 22:08:38 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Frankly, I'd think that the aspiring poet should first learn proper English grammar and syntax, next learn to stop repeating the same garbled Mills-n-Boone mush and select some original topic for a subject, and finally learn to use the Spell Check !
...And though I'd admire his good taste for selecting me as the recipient of his creative handiwork, I'd also do some desperate self-analysis as to how, in heaven's name, I could ever 'inspire' or 'deserve' such lowbrow 'poetic' comments !
2006-09-22 05:15:40 · answer #2 · answered by Zarama 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's lame man... too much words... keep it simple, you got the sweet part.
I guess you could break it into 2 parts... then it would be much smoother... even more poetic and romantic if the first part is all about her... the second part is what u'd love to do for her....
2006-09-22 05:24:06 · answer #3 · answered by Hang Tough 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Great Poem!!
2006-09-23 18:45:49 · answer #4 · answered by AAP0305 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This part is kinda lame: This poem not about myself,each word is all about you.
2006-09-22 05:19:05 · answer #5 · answered by Tartlettes 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think that is sooo sweet and romantic, would be better if he sd it with a propasl if he was my man
2006-09-22 05:10:28 · answer #6 · answered by kimmie_o2004 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Spectacular! I love it! I would shower him with kisses!
2006-09-22 05:05:41 · answer #7 · answered by Laila 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad
2006-09-22 05:11:10 · answer #8 · answered by Snifer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would definetly cry if my man read that to me.....
so so sweet
2006-09-22 06:06:13 · answer #9 · answered by OMG 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW!!!! Its lovely! I would just melt if a guy sent me that!!!
2006-09-22 05:07:29 · answer #10 · answered by ♥ Jodi ♥ Kaydi's Mummy ♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋