I find you have a very mixed bag there. My favorite is the one of the male model in France, because I like how you used the shape in the wall as a frame for his head. Some of your stuff is creative, some of it is more of a record of something else. A photograph of a drawing is only as good as the drawing. If the drawing is good, it had better be yours, or you're just using someone else's skills. Keep at it, taking images and looking at them and asking for critique is how you get better. It takes a brave person to ask for feedback.
2006-09-21 10:41:47
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answered by Teddie M 3
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I like toad on a flower, although the toad is not quite sharp and that is a drawback.
Bugs on yellow centred white flower is nice but could perhaps benefit from some cropping? i.e. cut the hand out of it - it's a distraction.
Insect on a stem(?) is nice too but once again not quite sharp - maybe that is just pixellation though, hard to tell.
I like your pics but I think the nature ones are all a bit 'busy' - and colours are slightly dull. You could easily boost the colours a bit in Photoshop and to combat the busy-ness I would use a wider aperture so that the background blurs. By the way I have no formal training and am an amateur, I just have a good eye for this kind of thing, so feel free to disregard my comment completely if you feel you know more about this than I do. Just giving my opinion : )
2006-09-25 03:39:07
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answered by ? 5
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The 1st link didn't open.
In the 2nd lot the ones that really struck me were the ones of water, the rest seemed relatively ordinary.
The 3rd link, the "I'm healing" was the most interesting.
I suspect you'd do well to pick an idea and work out all the permutations. You like to play with depth, so play with lenses.
You like light, so play with that too.
Good luck
2006-09-28 07:50:51
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answered by zara c 4
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Sonia and Christine photo is the best.
Lose the heart, though, because it's too obvious and doesn't work well.
Re-crop to 'come closer'.
Use Photoshop to 'tone down' the background (but don't lose it altogether).
You obviously enjoy photography, which is great!
But don't give up your day job just yet.
2006-09-26 17:43:09
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answered by CANAILLE 2
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The first one is a good compasition. I think there could have been more colour. I would actually invest in this picture though.
http://www.photosig.com/go/photos/view?id=1829618&forward=user
I think this one is the best and would invest in it.
Good work.
2006-09-21 15:26:35
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answered by Anonymous
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I think you images would benefit from been printed very big so that they have more impact and they definatly need to more more saturated is colour so that it captures the viewers attention.
like the style.
I've just graduated with a BA HONS in Photography In The Arts, i think you'd do well on a course like that.
2006-09-22 09:14:12
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answered by Heather 5
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I like your pics very much and they are just great! Well Done! I like the flowers the most.
2006-09-28 08:29:41
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answered by bluxzero 2
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I really like the ones of nature...I don't tend to like posed pictures or contrived images. Mostly, I do like them all though.
2006-09-21 21:21:37
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answered by Kimmie 4
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Nice.
2006-09-21 15:35:24
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answered by Avner Eliyahu R 6
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I did they are beauiful except the your hand that healing
2006-09-28 17:40:29
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answered by ahmadeyes2001 2
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