just one q: does the poem work for you?

Question

this poem is by me!
Introduction

Let me draw, ink for I have things to say
And sound I shall from cut and thrust
Of that my pen is sure.

For I shall scroll my words to chisel, a pleading pleasing note
That bends your most learned and lending ear to my delivery.
I delighting in twisting and twirling, a word in full flight
To cause your heart to, flutter.
But to engage you, in fancy-full delight I would gild
Each petal and leaf to a budding conclusion that draws
You closer to my-side.

Or; when the deepest howl of night descends
In, a twinkle of an eye pour a spell from a careless page
To cause, the written hand to speak
And that will parallel you straight to my:

SOUL.
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Answer 1

I think that it is written from the very heart of your soul to someone very dear to you. Whether this knows it or not is another question. If they don;t maybe you should give it to them to read.

God Bless.

Answer 2

Written from the heart or not - this is a QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS site, not somewhere for you to publish poems which most of us don't want to read anyway

Answer 3

That is the best poem I've read on here thus far! I love the way you've used the words!

Answer 4

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