Oh my God,what a beautiful gift,today you gave to me.
a woman of beauty,with the sweetest words,each one set my soul free.
My minds in a dream,my hearts souring like an eagle,My spirits as bright as the sun.
Oh how I wish, upon all of my faith, that she will be the one.
Her eyes are bright, but so sincere,As I gaze into her chocolate land of love.
A smile that will send, a soul thats lost,Through the gates in heaven above.
As I leave this poetic dream,I pray this woman, someday, she will be mine.
Oh how I will do anything to please you lord,Until the end of time.
ladies,If a man wrote this poem for you.How would you feel.
2006-09-19 19:19:41 · 13 answers · asked by lovely soul with insite 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
The chocolate land of love means brown eyes.
2006-09-19 19:43:04 · update #1
I Love It!!....Beautiful poem, your 2 sweet.
I enjoyed talking to you as well.
If you want to chat/talk for a few min.
I'll be here tonight, untill I get in bed....
Be Blessed
2006-09-20 15:33:28 · answer #1 · answered by AAP0305 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
personally i think the "chocolate land of love" is a bit much but that could definately be overlooked if the guy meat evey word he said.. i would be honored that any guy would take the time to write something for me. the poem is beautiful.
2006-09-19 19:27:20 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I had a boyfriend who was a songwriter. He wrote poems and songs for me and about me and I loved it!
Your poem is very nice! If you wrote it for me, I would like it if I were into you. If I was interested in you, I would be embarrassed. I have an adult music student who thinks he is in love with me and writes poems and reads them to me. I never know what to say. It is really awkward.
2006-09-19 19:26:45 · answer #3 · answered by runningviolin 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think of that love is in user-friendly terms a be conscious to describe something indescribable. Love is a great element and in simple terms asserting it means no longer something yet exhibiting that's what makes the be conscious love actual.
2016-10-15 05:04:10 · answer #4 · answered by valda 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow. i mean that! you can really really write! if you write anything else i would love to hear it.
if any guy wrote that for me i would be bawling my eyes out (thats a good thing). you made me cry and laugh then all over again. don't hold back and give this to a professional and see if they can turn it into a song. you would sell a million records. its amazing.
2006-09-20 16:57:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its not about writing poems
its about meaning it!!
if the poem was really good and u ment nothing in it.. like acting visa versa... it doesnt mean a thing..
but telling simple words and meaning it that would be GRRRRRRREAT!! and much better than a poem itself
2006-09-19 19:24:04 · answer #6 · answered by CuteeWorried 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OK i want to know one thing...What is chocolate land of love?
I personally do not like what is written, maybe its the way its written, i don't know, i just don't get it....Sorry, I'm just being honest and entitled to my opinion...
2006-09-19 19:39:07 · answer #7 · answered by ABBYsMom 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Personally, i would probably be trying my hardest not to laugh.
Poems arn't my thing, but i know some chicks that would adore something like that being said.
2006-09-19 19:22:48 · answer #8 · answered by EcXeSSive ConSUmptiON 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
touched....and feel that finally i found a worthy guy =)..... BUT if i dunt kno him very well id say.... wow this is freaky
2006-09-19 19:25:00 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'll use those beautiful words to my girl,thx
2006-09-19 19:24:02 · answer #10 · answered by autumnray 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋