ok this is a poem i wrote: the black roses: "the girls that are talking in the hall telling secerts about their best friends no one cares that shes gone no one even notice she never talked to anyone she never even said why all they know is that on her grave is a black rose put there by her true love" so what do you think?
2006-09-19 14:34:54 · 9 answers · asked by FrozenCyclone Xmen Rule 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Performing Arts
Very Gothic,very sad,very lonely.I like it
2006-09-19 14:52:12 · answer #1 · answered by Mac 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds familiar. She never ever said....something, what? I'd change the true love. Maybe they just heard about a black rose, they can't figure who put it there. Just a suggestion based on the cliche bunch of girls in the hall.
2006-09-19 21:46:09 · answer #2 · answered by obenypopstar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
inspirational. makes u wanna find out if theres a sequal. definately creepy. a lot said with few words. well done ;)
and a tip: next time dun put "do not copy" coz then every1 does.
2006-09-20 08:24:45 · answer #3 · answered by ♥PurePoison♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a haunting poem whose story I would like to know.
2006-09-19 21:37:49 · answer #4 · answered by beez 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Death becomes her?
Are you writing about your own self pity? Or the death of a friend?
2006-09-20 09:14:25 · answer #5 · answered by jaike 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think that is a very good poem
2006-09-19 21:43:38 · answer #6 · answered by twistedstunna 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very haunting, but good...
2006-09-19 21:50:16 · answer #7 · answered by reneechipman 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds really depressing...:(
2006-09-19 21:37:39 · answer #8 · answered by majorlanceandthewizard 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It doesnt make any sense!!!!!!
2006-09-19 21:38:59 · answer #9 · answered by flo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋