If u copy me I HATE YOU!!!!!!!here it goes
"Friendship is sacred
friendship is fine
if ur looking 4 friendship
here take mine."
won't it make u melt wen a guy tells u it?
I made it on my 360.
2006-09-15 19:02:47 · 22 answers · asked by stephanie 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
i won't melt when a guy tells it to me but you are making me melt! whoa! you are in a middle school but your peom sounds pretty nice for your age! you go girl!
2006-09-15 19:38:13 · answer #1 · answered by immortality1983 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it would not make me melt - all he wants is friendship and i already have plenty of friends.
The poem is alright - it would be better if you could express the whole thing from a different light instead of it being so straight forward... but to each his own. I am not dissin your poem by any means, the fact that you wrote it is admirable enough because it's a means of self expression. write on my friend write on.
2006-09-16 02:05:34 · answer #2 · answered by love earth 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love your poem. You know what? I think it would make an excellent greeting card. Maybe you should contact Hallmark, Shoebox greetings, or something like that. You should make several. Maybe do a friendship theme.
You are a great young writer! Keep up the good work!
2006-09-16 02:05:49 · answer #3 · answered by Roger S 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If you copy me I HATE YOU MORE!!!!! here it goes
"Your poem is stupid
Your poem is dumb
if your looking 4 compliments
you aint getting none."
melt on that
THERE YOU GO!!!
If you ask for someones opinion, then you need to accept that it may be a negative one. Honey, don't wear your heart out on your sleeve. I would appreciate it if you would quit sending me messages and comments.
2006-09-16 02:06:08 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
u know what? most of the people are cursed with not appreciating anything...really!!! i dont know the reason why....little appreciation can boost any talent....u goahead if u want write poems and everytime u will improve ur self...the best!
2006-09-16 02:15:14 · answer #5 · answered by tanya 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's very simple and cute. Nothing too deep, not much artistic expression. I give it 2 stars out of 5.
2006-09-16 02:05:48 · answer #6 · answered by Suz E. Home BAKER 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I think you should keep being a friend whenever and wherever you can, and keep following your dreams too.
2006-09-16 02:16:36 · answer #7 · answered by brad 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats a pretty good poem - congrats.!!!
PS - you shouldn;t say hate....
2006-09-16 02:07:39 · answer #8 · answered by Nicky 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think you should consider keeping this "poem" your little secret.
2006-09-16 02:04:43 · answer #9 · answered by bigjohn B 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I never think about poems
2006-09-16 02:04:52 · answer #10 · answered by soofi 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋