writen with a pencil and sled with a kiss,
do u love or do u not,
u told me once but i forgot
from all the girls i ever met u r the one i wont for get
and if i die before u do
ill go to heaven and wait for u
if youer not there by judgement day
ill know u went thee other way
ill give the angels back there wings
and risk the lost of everything
just to prove my love is true
ill go to hell just to be u.
2006-09-13 15:12:39 · 38 answers · asked by spanishguy21 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Nothing like telling a girl that she might go to Hell. They just love that. It is kind of creepy if you are just going out.
2006-09-13 15:16:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Perfect, I'll edit it so that when you give it to her she'll understand it better. (No offense, I had a hard time reading it. Sweet poem btw)
Written with a pencil, sealed with a kiss.
Do you love or do you not?
You told me once but I forgot.
From all the girls I ever met you are the one I won't forget.
And if I die before you do
I'll go to heaven and wait for you.
If you aren't there by Judgement Day
I'll know you went the other way.
I'll give the angels back their wings,
and risk the loss of everything.
Just to prove my love is true,
I'll go to hell just to be with you.
2006-09-13 15:15:28 · answer #2 · answered by winds_of_justice 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your not a christian are you? why would you give up heaven, the greatest gift of all. yeah you may love this girl, but when you die you WONT care. when (if) you go to heaven all youll do there is praise the LORD of all. and if youre not a christian, your going to hell in a picnic basket. (not litterally). so basically if youre not a christian, youre going to hell anyways why tell her if you're gonna be there togetther anyways. not for long tho cuz on judgement day hell and all that inhabits in it will be destroyed. along with you if you dont believe.
2006-09-13 15:20:50 · answer #3 · answered by thee wojc 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it alot. Its really well put together, But you should add to the last sentence. "I'll go to hell just to be with you". Good Luck!
2006-09-13 15:17:45 · answer #4 · answered by Jennifer C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was written in an aim convo by two 9 year olds
2006-09-13 15:13:57 · answer #5 · answered by rwest 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I've gotten that e-mail like 25 times, no joke.
b original.
2006-09-13 15:15:24 · answer #6 · answered by djkay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your poem is quite romantic, just a slight problem here, some spelling errors. lol. but I like your poem
2006-09-13 15:17:26 · answer #7 · answered by dtmc542006 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool words.
2006-09-13 15:15:41 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
really good but you might want to base that opinion on yourself rather than from other people like me i write lyrics i sing em
2006-09-13 15:14:55 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I have a seven year old grandson who is a better poet than that and he spells allot better also. you asked I told :-)
2006-09-13 15:16:30 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋