From my parents' love, I have positive thinkings, and from my friends, teacher, and people I meet makes me ambitious. I change my thinkings from impressions from the books, and see new things from the travel and be curious.
2006-09-12 19:44:23 · 13 answers · asked by himo9294 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Languages
I have positive thoughts because of my parents' love. Friends, teachers and people I meet make me ambitious. Books help me to change my way of thinking, and my curiousity allows me to see and experience new things when I travel.
2006-09-12 19:49:01 · answer #1 · answered by Retro Deviant 2 · 4⤊ 0⤋
My parents' love inspired my positive outlook, and my friends, my teacher, and the people I meet drive my ambition. Books have changed my thinking and travel has broadened my horizons and expanded my curiosity.
That might be a little beyond your level, but I would at least change "from my parents' love" to something more specific like "because of my parents' love". "Thinkings" isn't much of a word--say "thoughts" or use the verb "think". Whatever "makes you ambitious" must be a person (or thing) not "from" a person. If it's more than one person (as here), say "make", not "makes".
You don't need "the" before either "books" or "travel", because you're talking about those things in general.
I'm not sure what "be curious" is meant to mean. Is it another way (besides travel) that you see new things, or is it another result (besides seeing new things) of travel?
So the closest grammatically-correct version of your text would be something like:
Because of my parents' love, I have positive thoughts, and my friends, my teacher and people I meet make me ambitious. I change my thoughts because of impressions from books, and see new things from travel and being curious.
(Or: and see new things and become more curious, from travel.)
2006-09-13 05:23:40 · answer #2 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As a result of my parents' love, I have positive thoughts. I have learned to be ambitious from my friends, teachers and people I meet. I sometimes change my way of thinking after reading books. My curiosity allows me to see new things when I travel.
2006-09-13 02:56:40 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
My parents love my positive thoughts
Instead of thinkings use thoughts
makes - make
from impressions - by impressions, books and seeing new things traveling and become curious.
2006-09-13 07:32:08 · answer #4 · answered by Victoria B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My parents' love has instilled in me a positive attitude. The good qualities and achievements of friends, teachers and other people I meet have made me ambitious. Literature has opened my mind to new ideas and travel has given me a sense of curiosity.
2006-09-13 03:06:15 · answer #5 · answered by PetraBean 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's my parents' love where i gained positive thinking,
and from my friends, teachers, and other people that i met and made me ambitious.
i changed my way of thinking from impressions, from books, and learned to see new things from adventure and curiosity.
i'm having a hard time to edit your paragraph because i can't fully understand what you mean. i don't know what your thought is. are you going to use it for your graduation speech?
anyways... i'm not an american. i'm a filipino.
what's your nationality?
just want to give it a try.
;-)
2006-09-13 03:17:55 · answer #6 · answered by lulu 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your construction begged to be shot. Please rephrase your sentences, dear. You may want to consider saying "My parents have helped developed my positive thinking. My friends and teachers have inspired me to be ambitious. I discover and learn new things from reading books and travelling."
2006-09-13 03:02:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anch 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like one of those computer programs that translate to English from a foreign language. Run it through again, about 5 times, then get back to me.
2006-09-13 02:49:53 · answer #8 · answered by galacticsleigh 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
You go on writing and ask dad or mom to correct .
2006-09-13 02:52:16 · answer #9 · answered by Bhahagyam 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
What is your nationality?
2006-09-13 02:46:38 · answer #10 · answered by Elchin I 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋