2006-09-11 17:38:36 · 7 answers · asked by singmei12 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Please listen to me when I tell you that Elliot is right and everyone else is either wrong or changing the intent of your sentence.
2006-09-11 17:47:05 · answer #1 · answered by ginevra1weasley 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The river my brother and I played in wasn't clean anymore.
2006-09-11 17:42:01 · answer #2 · answered by Missy A 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. The river in which I played with my brother is no longer clean.
2006-09-11 17:42:13 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Elliot's answer is nearly correct. It should actually be: "The river, in which I played with my brother, is no longer clean." Or, if your statement is in the past tense: "The river, in which I played with my brother, was no longer clean"
Don't forget the punctuation.
2006-09-11 23:56:31 · answer #4 · answered by cloud43 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, did you play the river like the radio or did you two play IN the river. Is this your sentence or one you are supposed to correct? Simpler is always better...
The river in which I played with my brother used to be clean
Is one choice; BUT:
The river my brother and I played in used to be clean.
Is a better choice...
2006-09-11 17:53:44 · answer #5 · answered by ronibuni 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope, it's "the river which i played with my brother in wasn't clean anymore".
2006-09-11 17:42:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"The river where I played with my brother . . ." is better. Or, The river that I played in with my brother . . ."
2006-09-11 17:42:24 · answer #7 · answered by klmita 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋