im sopossed to write something about mexicans and i did is this ok or need to write something else!!!
Roses are red
Mexicans are brown
thats my raza
so don't put it down!!
Ma Mexican pride
I will not hide
My Mexican race
I will not disgrace
MY Mexican blood
flows hot & true
My Mexican ppl
will always stand by
thru thick & thin
till the day we die
Our Mexican flag
higher than all tha rest
cuz every 1 knows
MEXICANS ARE THE BEST!!!
Mexican pride is mah mind
Mexican blood is mah kind
So step aside and let me through
Cuz its all about tha Mexican crew
Life sucks and then u die but if u
Mexican u die with pride!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-09-11 15:44:34 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
If this was an English assigment, you should fix a lot of spelling issues.
2006-09-11 15:58:16 · answer #1 · answered by Carol R 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's to gangster or is that how you want it to sound like you can make it more powerful by telling why you have mexican pride this poem you have looks like something that came from an prison inmate.
2006-09-11 23:03:28 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My Mexican ppl
will always stand by
thru thick & thin
till the day we die...................reword that it doesnt flow
reword the higher thing cuz yeah that doesnt sound very right
2006-09-11 22:49:17 · answer #3 · answered by mcrpunkette99 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its good to hear young people with pride - but you don't have to put others down to put yourself up so reword "higher than the rest" part and spell words out like ppl should be people good luck
2006-09-11 22:48:29 · answer #4 · answered by worldstiti 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Your poem sounds great. I'm with you all the way girl!
2006-09-11 22:47:17 · answer #5 · answered by cassie05 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
sounds good to me
2006-09-11 22:48:32 · answer #6 · answered by bobbie21brady 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
No...the AMERICAN FLAG flies higher than the rest...other than that...no further comment.
2006-09-11 22:50:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
very imaginative
2006-09-11 22:48:02 · answer #8 · answered by Jubei 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋