what do you think of this poem about katrina?

Question

Its called"Cries for Help and Tears of Fear."

A total nights destruction,the lives it took meant nothing.
Families,pets, and broken hearts,homes and yards were torn apart.
Flooded lands with cars so still,crashing down streets and floating down hills.
What happen next to my dismay,were times to come mornings day.
The people left not in a home,were housed inside a hell filled dome.
Rapes,deaths,and tears of fear,sending messages for some to hear.
But eyes and ears were allsealed closed,
pointing fingers as the death toll rose.
Then one day,they sarted to hear,those cries for help and tears of fear.
Now they do all that they can,to make right for the wrong of man.
Katrina was bad,but what is next,more deaths,more cries,more storms exists.
Many wrongs can make a right,but how many will it take to save more lives.

Do you think this poem is true.

Answer 1

You basically summed up that whole situation in a few words. Yes I do like your poem and I most certainly agree....

Be Blessed!!

Answer 2

Yes, I do, except I don't think that many wrongs can make a right. I think many rights might just begin to make up for the wrongs.

It's a great poem. Did you write it? It does a good job of capturing the hopelessness of the people who suffered.

It would flow much better if you separated each line, so that the rhyming word was at the end of the line...for example:

Families,pets, and broken hearts,
Homes and yards were torn apart.

Answer 3

Ok what I get from this poem is that Bush is to blame,
and global warming caused the storm. I won't even comment.
However, I do wonder why you are posting a Katrina poem
on the 5th anniversary of Sept. 11th. I suspect that you
feel Katrina was more significant of an event. You are sad
a person all around.

Answer 4

It's a nice poem. Very emotional, it sounds like you were there.

Answer 5

You must have been there or know someone who was.

It's beautiful.

Answer 6

Doesn't ryhme. I thought you people ryhme.